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for A Most Trusted Soldier

by Rettavex

schedule February 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I so loved this story!
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am very impress with this story and love the way it ended for both parties... Love the plot but most of all I loved the conclusion of it.
person CHoman
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just a note and a cookie.
I very much enjoyed your Snarry. Though I can't really see Harry as the Dom and Snape as the Sub, I thought you pulled it off extremely well. XD I was kind of hoping to see it end with Snape getting preggers...that would have been a humorous image...I'm glad you didn't. It leaves room for my imagination to grow and roam... Casting Wood into the evil villain was great! Loved the story from start to finish, cried when Snape begged Luna to become Harry's mate, threw tomatoes at my computer when Wood beat up Severus--still trying to get the seeds out of the keyboard...--and cried again when Harry claimed Snape again at the end! --it was exhausting, now I need a pepper-up potion. ^^ Thank you so much for sharing, you really have a great imagination and talent!!!
person Tariray
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow - i come back a year later and this fic is still epic, like really, wow.

I tend to be a bit aquicky around something very hard core - not entirely my cup of tea. but the smut is just so very appropriate and -wow-. Rally it was great fun reading and also just beautiful to keep reading, seeing your story develop.

You have made Snarry my HP OTP. Well done, mind if i mention you in one of my blogs? just a little gush about how awesome you and your fic are.

You are a fantatic writer, well done

T
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
End of ch. 10, I'm still wondering why the contraceptive is in a drawer instead of being in use.
person QueenB
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 28 I did like this story although it won
person QueenB
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 18 Whew, the sex is like the love
person QueenB
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 19 Due to the time lapse since the altercation in Hogsmeade he and Harry both had settled on the conclusion that Oliver Wood had gotten the hint and had moved on to sow his oats elsewhere. It seems they were very wrong.

Well, duh.

I know you
person QueenB
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 21 That was one fantastic battle! Even if it was mostly magical, I am impressed by the sheer strength and cunning of it. (I can
person QueenB
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 22 Severus lay on his back staring into the empty space above him, his eyes not even registering the movement of ethnically diverse cherubs Madame Pomfrey had conjured just for his amusement.

Cherubs? CHERUBS?! I can