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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoyed your story. I have just found it and read it all the way through.
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent! I have always been able to imagine Severus as a Roman, so this is like the story of my dreams! And with a submissive Harry as his slave...well...what could be better?
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very good start, very interesting.
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good writing skills you have there!!!Good storyline, but Snape's an ass!!!!
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. I am so glad the plot bunnies ran away with this one. When I come home, it brings a smile to my face to know that there is another chapter or two awaiting me. Thanks for sharing such a rich and compelling story. I look forward to your future chapters.
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is Snape feeling alittle guilty?....he better be!
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry!!! awesome chapter.
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must gush! This is a very promising start; so many things to be resolved and the hint of more to come. The promise of a chapter a day makes it even more exciting, it reminds me of when I was a little girl and my father used to bring me a candy every day from work. I will be eagerly waiting for today treat.
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, i must remember to thank those killer rabbits from hell, because this story is fantastic!!!!
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I cannot say this enough. Well written, long, satisfying chapters, an original storyline, and I like the subtle way in which you've given Severus and Harry's friends and neighbors characteristics of the people they know in their own timeline. I will admit that I found Severus to be a bit more harsh and uncaring than usual, particularly after he'd just told Harry he'd care for him and protect him and even let him hold his hand in thr marketplace, but then you balanced it out beautifully having Modia enlighten Severus and making him see the error of his ways. I particularly liked Severus' introspection as he sat in the courtyard pondering his treatment of Harry, and him ultimately admitting to himself he was wrong. This story is so captivating, I'm completely enthralled, and was so very happy to see not one new chapter as expected, but two. What a treat! I cannot wait for tomorrow's installment. Really, Bravo!