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I am LOVING this story! I have a bit of a thing for bad guys actually being misunderstood and being goodies really (as long as they also maintain some kind of baddie mistique/power and don't end up being wet!) No sogginess detected yet so all is good. I do like a bit of Dummbledore bashing too (cos when you think of what he did/ sat by and let happen when he was supposed to be all powerful...) so feel free to do some of that. Also any story where Sirius is still alive is OK by me. Then to cap it all off you have a Lucius/Harry pairing which is my all time favourite couple in existance (I can't even read Harry/Ginny anymore). I am in seventh heaven!!! Keep up the good work!

Yay a new chapter! Yes, that did clear things up for me! Though I wonder if Tom is the dom and Sev is the sub...well with Harry being as powerful as he is supposed to be is it that the static issue only happens if the dom is that powerful? So if Luc is Harry's dom he wouldn't have had the problem with the static? Hmm, thats what I am thinking. Though I don't know if that was what you meant.

There were a few mistakes as far as grammar and spelling that I noticed in this chapter. Such as made it...made it and instead of Remus it was Remeus. If you would like me to beta I would be happy to do so. If so my email is shinji.fukushima@yahoo.com. If not that is cool too, but thought I would offer my services since I would like to see this story blossom into everything it could be.

Great chapter and I am looking forward to the next!

i like it! more! more!

Lovely chapter lol. Oog gross medicine yuk. Nice to see sirius and remus together. My sev and tom certainly are hony teenagers. Tom sitting at his desk with severus practically laying all over him. Update soon please.

I like it.
Hope you update soon.

intriguing. I like where this is going. :)

i love it so far

Oh poor Harry! Very interesting detail with Tom and the tattoo. Which was very cool looking! I like the ideas so far and the plot in this chapter and I am definitely anxious to read more. I think Lucius/Harry is tied for my favorite pairings along with Harry/Fenrir...that does not include threesomes of course. Did that make sense? Anyway I am curious though, if Sev and Tom are mates how come they just recently discovered each other? I mean like with Lucius he was able to scent his mate in Harry's 3rd year so shouldn't something like that have happened with Tom and Sev? Or is it because of the type of magical creature? Oooo I simply can't wait to read more!

Ill be checking back daily!

OK totally hooked your off to a really good start. Ooh love a veela lucius with his mate harry. I hope lucius and sev and tom are going to sort out the dursleys. Giggled at sev and tom two horney teenagers.More soon please.

This is very interesting!
I would love to read more so update soon ^^