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for Runaway Mate

by Wolverinegal

schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh!! interesting creature
lucius should have torture percy before killing him, but its good that he die anyway

update soon!
person Jan
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Near Wolves.... Hmm...Never heard of them, but they sure sound cool!! Can't wait to read more about them! Love this story, it's brilliant!!!

Though I've got to say that I was hoping for both Dumblefuck and Percy to have to most gruesome and painful of death ever imaginable!!! Not the quick and painless death that they had :( Oh well! Still love the story ^_^

Please update chapter 8 soon.

Jan^_~
person xhedwigx
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so awesome, just well awesome.
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no its really good
person Celeste
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You raped Harry?! Okay I mean you made Percy rape Harry? You are an absolutely evil person aren't you.

And for all the torture you made them go through, Dumbledore and Percy's death was so quick! That is rather unfair. You should have made them suffer more.
person Dani
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, man! How could you? That was so mean!!! Please, please, please update soon!!! This story has completely caught my interest!
~dani
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EVIL! You're evil!!! ahhhhh!!!!
person h2elena
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a gorgeous chapter lol such a sweet name ashley rose malfoy. Bloody dumbledore and tonks do they never give up. Its time for a rescue mission lucius and co to the rescue and this time those weasleys and that nasty dumbledore need to be taken care of. Hurry back with an update please. You have left us with a real cliff hanger.
person Celeste
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yup you are definitely evil. You woosh throught the pregnancy... you left out all the potential cuddly and fluffy scenes and of course hormonal scenes between Harry and Lucius, and then you end it with a cliffie?

You are an evil evil person. *Pout*

So, fix this. Next chapter needs to have happy and fluffy scenes.

Please?

Pretty please?

With Harry on the top please?
person qwerty
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you admit you're evil because the truth sets you free... hahaha, corny , I know.
That was evil though. Didn't the Manor have wards and such? And if Dumbles could break through them then why didn't he break through them before? Lucius was absent others times as well...
Good chapter.
update!!!!