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by Adonia

person Anon
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is somewhat aptly named for I couldn't wait to get to the next chapter. :) I love how this isn't your typical pregnancy story (not that I have read many). I love that Hermione is rather calm (turmoil on the inside of course)given what has happened and I like the matter of fact way she is dealing with things. Given that she is 25 in this story that is the reaction I would have imagined her to have. I am emjoying the way you are depicting the characters (Luna is a riot) and the sense of humour you have injected into this story. I look forward to reading more (hopefully soon).
person kazfeist
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm so glad you've updated....I can't wait to see how this ends! It's obvious he feels more for her than he's letting on, and it would be nice for her to be happy, too. :D
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GENIUS! I love your sense of humor! Just keeps getting better and better!
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha! I love the story! The plot is not particularly original, but heck! Who cares by the way of your storytelling? If anything, you just made it more original by the way you wrote chapter by chapter. It kinda reminded me of Juno actually :))
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this! Truly amazing. Its such an original idea from a not-so-original idea. Make sense? Lol. You know what I mean. Its funny how everyone reacts. Ooooh I can't wait to see where this goes. Excited for an update!
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg amazing you have to update sooooooooon!
person kazfeist
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a hoot! Can't wait for the rest! :D
person kazfeist
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Had to review again. I love your Hermione. She's so focussed on the problem-solving aspect. I also like your post-war wizarding London. Thank God it's come into the Twentieth Century, at least. :D
person kazfeist
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really shaping up to be a lovely story. Drily humourous, and poor Hermione, all teary-eyed already. Thanks for having Draco offer to do the honorable thing. I can just see them stumbling towards the altar, and each other's hearts. :D
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm madly in love with the whole story and would gush about specific details and the great characterizations ad nauseum, but I'm running late and will have to review later.