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for Painted Bodies, Painted Minds

by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha, Harry is so cute and Draco so patient.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like that last line, lol. This was a cute short story. When the ghost horse came up I burst out laughing. The book was awesome though. Wondering over Draco's safety because a book dropped. Nice.
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sooo love this!
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was funny to read :o)))
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh that was wonderful! so creative!
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol - the last line was just perfect! Just enough to leave you shuddering and wishing it'd continue, but knowing it would ruin the effect if there was more, so you've got to think of it yourself. Brilliant! And Harry was a real little brat actually. I mean come on, spilling everything in the kitchen just to distract Draco??? I'm surprised Draco kept his cool! I was at least tapping my fingers over the desk in annoyance for Draco's plight, and I could just image the whole thing, the serenity of Draco and his painting, and then Harry coming in and bursting that haze ... glares ensues.

Great work,
~gorgeousbowneyes
person MeLaiya
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol, that was cute. Keep up the good work and upate soon
person Yume111
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, that was really fun to read, the humour was great and it seems you had a lot of fun writing it, too.

It sounds like a lovely relationship that they are having, quite relaxed and balanced, in spite of Harry
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this one best so far. The depth of it and the ingenuity. Not only is Harry a great fuck, he as a great mind. And have you ever met and Ian that wasn't a bubble head? I haven't.

Nicole
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
person qwerty
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cute