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July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is this story discontinued or up for adoption? I wish you would update it soon it has been a few years since last update. Maybe, you should just remove it since you are not interested in writing it, and it's not fair to people wanting an update on it to be left hanging in limbo.
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May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
loved it! cant wait for the next chapter! Can you email me when you post it? Thanks!!!
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March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I saw you posted a message in the forum under searching for a story so you are still around. Why don't you just delete this since you have no interest in it anymore plus no one can even read the last chapter it's a total mess all jumbled together. I liked the other one better anyways.
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November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it would be great but for the upsidedown ? mark and the 1/2 mark in every third word of the sentance
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September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
chapter 18 is hard to read. When its like that I refuse to read them. I hope you post more soon.
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July 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ummm, did you know chapter 18 is all jibberish? I just thought you would want to know so it can be fixed or spaced. It's all jumbled together and hard to read. By the way, are you going to continue writing this story or is it discontinued? Is is still going to be a Lucius and Harry pairing or are you making it het with Snape and Hermione?
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June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So Lucius is going to find out.
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January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hey
love the story please keep updating
love the story please keep updating
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January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I apologize for upsetting you! Perhaps next time, once in a while you can just put up a note up under your author panel to let readers who want to know what is going the status of your WIP stories. I will be patient and wait please do not feel like I am rushing you. ~~~ begs forgiveness ~~~
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January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You have a great plot but your rushing things. Someone who would go threw that kind of rejection that Harry was subjected to by
Lucius would not be that forgiving nor would they get over it that quickly. If you like to rush to big events then add a ( 3 months later Harry has talked to Ron and Hermione about what happened that faithful night Another thing it is very OOC for Harry to sing. To tell you the truth I stopped reading your story after I got to the part where he sings. Most people don't break out in song at random times. Now if maybe you had him listening to the radio as he gazed put the window that would be more realistic. Lucius's emotional up and downs are a little crazy your reasoning behind them is good but I feel you need to work in more of why this situation set him off. It just seems like he randomly goes into fits of rage. Again you have a great plot and plenty of passion for writing but you need to slow down and give more back ground.
Lucius would not be that forgiving nor would they get over it that quickly. If you like to rush to big events then add a ( 3 months later Harry has talked to Ron and Hermione about what happened that faithful night Another thing it is very OOC for Harry to sing. To tell you the truth I stopped reading your story after I got to the part where he sings. Most people don't break out in song at random times. Now if maybe you had him listening to the radio as he gazed put the window that would be more realistic. Lucius's emotional up and downs are a little crazy your reasoning behind them is good but I feel you need to work in more of why this situation set him off. It just seems like he randomly goes into fits of rage. Again you have a great plot and plenty of passion for writing but you need to slow down and give more back ground.