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by soldiersgirl0709

person mariteri
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hermione's speech to the Meraders was priceless. It was a gem. Keep up the good work and update soon as possible.
person twinsie
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay - someone finally writing that Lily isn't perfect! I love the confrontation between Hermione and the Marauders...awesome job! Can't wait for more!
person Carine
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Snape-Goddess,
this story is so great (as always).Although you are never canon,your Severus is alway in character.I cannot wait to read more.Sureves Epans
person Tenar10r
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the dance and the kissing but even better was Hermione turning on the Marauders and giving them what-for!
person jaimelee
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very intersting story. I really liked how Hermione stood up to James and the others for Severus. I can't wait to see what'll happen when she returns to 1997. Please please please update soon!
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I love the fact that Hermione isn't friends with Harry's parents, so many time-turner fics are like that, and i like your little twist. I can't wait to read more, please update soon.
person jraskin
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was wonderful, I love that Mione and Sev are starting to get together and she gave the marauders a piece of her mind! I always though it was cruel the way they treated Sev, its nice to see them told off for it. Please update soon!
person Utopia
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU'RE BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!

I should be doing my human evolution coursework... and I'm sat reading THIS! Though, I must admit this is better and a lot easier on the brain!

Right, onto chapter 1!
person Utopia
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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What's Dumbledore playing at now?! The meddling old goat is messing with time!

Thinner, younger Sev sounds rather... edible to me.
person Utopia
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, Dumbledore should really be called Emma (Jane Austin novel about someone who delights in matchmaking, but generally mucks up)!

Well, I suppose every old wizard needs a hobby.

10/10