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by soldiersgirl0709

person twinsie
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good and I can tell you're getting to the juicy parts. *whispers* You are getting to the juicy part, right?

I love that Hermione put Lily in her place and showed her what a snob she's being, though I would love a little more Lily bashing. She was never one of my favorite characters (most fanfics I've read wrote her as being perfect and I can't stand that...it irks me to no end). So I love, LOVE fics that have Lily bashing (throw in a Ginny bashing w/a sprinkle of Ron and I'm one happy camper...ha ha)!

Can't wait to read more...
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. Peter really creeps me out...and the Marauders and Lily get out on my nerve. Lily's just being self-righteous and jealous and I'm so happy Hermione put her in here place...Can't wait for the limes, I bet they'll be delicious. LOL. Update soon, please.
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I can't wait for Hermione to meet his parents....please update soon.
person Anonymous
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, excited to read what happens next
person neelix
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better, really nice writing. Cant wait for more... especially looking forward to her going back to the present day and the present Severus!!!
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh dear god....When i first read the discriprion of your story, I was like 'oh dear god not another back in time story, just like everyone elses' I just ate a huge piece of humble pie. Although your chapeters seem to be small, thats the only thing that throws me off. What kind of angst should we be looking out for in the new chapter?
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i really love this story ^.^

and im so happy we'll be getting daily updates =D
person jraskin
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG That was soo sweet of Sev to invite Mione home with him!!Its so sweet how protective he is of her!!Please update soon!
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I really want to yank Lily's hair for being such a beeyotch.