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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE! *stomps foot* please???? with chocolate covered severus' on top???
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic especially because it's Young!Snape having a better time :D can't wait to see where this ends up. Sav
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That is all I can say is Wow! This is the first time I have reviewed one of your storiees, even though I have read them all and am a huge fan. I am really enjoying your portrayal of the young Severus and the true Gryffindor that is Hermoine. Keep up the great work and I look forward to you next update.
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Wow and wow some more!!!! I just want to keep reading and reading and am so disappointed when i get to the end of each chapter. I too am not a great fan of time travel fics to I admit, I didn't read this one from the start. I think I started to read after you posted chapter 7. Now I'm hooked! I'm glad I gave this one a chance.
Peter is giving me the willies, I could see that slimy little rat bastard forcing himself upon our heroine. EWW!! And I do love that Hermione gave those marauders the what-for. They really were just bullies. No Wonder Sev hates Harry so much. And don't even get me started on prick teasing cow, Lily.
Anyways, to sum up: I LOVE THIS FIC and YOU for writting it. May your plot bunnies abound(LOL) & I hope this review finds you well.
Hoping to read alot more real soon
Your new SUPER-FAN!!!
Slytherin-princess
XxXx
Peter is giving me the willies, I could see that slimy little rat bastard forcing himself upon our heroine. EWW!! And I do love that Hermione gave those marauders the what-for. They really were just bullies. No Wonder Sev hates Harry so much. And don't even get me started on prick teasing cow, Lily.
Anyways, to sum up: I LOVE THIS FIC and YOU for writting it. May your plot bunnies abound(LOL) & I hope this review finds you well.
Hoping to read alot more real soon
Your new SUPER-FAN!!!
Slytherin-princess
XxXx
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm glad you wrote it. I'm loving young Sev and bold Hermione. I don't know if I can find anymore nakeds, I haven't even found that same one again. But I'll send any good Slytherin stuff your way.
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story! please update soon! i love how severus is!
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
only 19.
*giggle* I know we're on about another era here, but the age of consent in the UK is 16... by 19, me n the hubby-to-be were practically pros! lol! Though, the era of free love is long before my time.
Eh, 19? Doesn't 7th year put them at 17, 18 at a pinch? That's the equivalent of UK 6th form. OWLs are the wizarding GCSEs, and NEWTS are wizarding A and A2 levels.
Though, train snuggles were soooooo cute! Sev has a heart; though I suspect a fair proportion of it is still black as coal, but it's got a little silver lining! (And for some strange reason, I got the image of a lump of coal wrapped in silver hologramatic paper and tied with a green ribbon?! *eh?*).
Lucius is a few years older, and has already ploughed head-first into the underworld! I think sex, drugs and rock-and-roll probably gets a whole new meaning with the death-eaters-in-training! Snape is undoubtedly powerful, and with an angel on his arm, his arm might just end up mark-free? *prepared to beg.*
Peter gives me the creeps. *shudders* he's like a skanky Hugh Heffner, but without the playboy bunnies! (does that make sense?).
Sirius and James both need a slap for their behaviour! They're nothing but bullies who find joy in vicimisation of those weaker than them, or those who stand out! I always wondered how the marauders got such a 'positive' light from JKR? Remus is sweet, and like Snape needs to belong somewhere - but his choice of people to belong with is lacking... but I guess he didn't have much choice as a lonely lad. *sigh*
I giggled at his comment that his house leader (Slughorn??) would probably give him points for sneaking a Gryffindor girl back to his room! LOL! And the double takes of the others was hillarious! I've been on the end of the double takes when out with Andy! Nobody believed that such a handsome lad would want the bookwormish swot!
I love the playful antics between the two in his bed, he's trying to be the perfect gentleman and she's not letting him! I wonder if his gentlemanly actions (rare for a 17-year-old-who's-permenantly-horny) are due to witnessing the horrendous behaviour of his Father?
Let me think, I normally manage to sneak a request for something in... we've had Lucius tying corsets, and giving her parents a dragon... what strange wizarding thing is young Snape going to do? Hermione's a virgin, and a lot of fics have him collect the blood for potions... but it might be a smidge cliche and obvious... so some strange ritual thingy or something? A long time ago, the parents would watch a wedding night to make sure the deed happened, and then hang the blood-stained sheets out of the window (and I think the Romanian?? gypsies do something similar still, but its a stained white nightie tied to a chicken)... So, maybe a special sheet with runes and spells on it to safeguard a young couple or something?? Maybe it could be shrunk down, halved and put into a precious-metal locket or something as a powerful protective ward to protect them both?? Voldie will be on the up-and-up, they'll need the protection.
Oh heck! what if Hermione's involvement changes time? What if a potion is needed for the horcruxes? And if Snape didn't get a dark mark... Lilly and James wouldn't have died; Harry might have had siblings; Neville's parents would be OK and aurors... it would re-write EVERYTHING.
11/10!
*giggle* I know we're on about another era here, but the age of consent in the UK is 16... by 19, me n the hubby-to-be were practically pros! lol! Though, the era of free love is long before my time.
Eh, 19? Doesn't 7th year put them at 17, 18 at a pinch? That's the equivalent of UK 6th form. OWLs are the wizarding GCSEs, and NEWTS are wizarding A and A2 levels.
Though, train snuggles were soooooo cute! Sev has a heart; though I suspect a fair proportion of it is still black as coal, but it's got a little silver lining! (And for some strange reason, I got the image of a lump of coal wrapped in silver hologramatic paper and tied with a green ribbon?! *eh?*).
Lucius is a few years older, and has already ploughed head-first into the underworld! I think sex, drugs and rock-and-roll probably gets a whole new meaning with the death-eaters-in-training! Snape is undoubtedly powerful, and with an angel on his arm, his arm might just end up mark-free? *prepared to beg.*
Peter gives me the creeps. *shudders* he's like a skanky Hugh Heffner, but without the playboy bunnies! (does that make sense?).
Sirius and James both need a slap for their behaviour! They're nothing but bullies who find joy in vicimisation of those weaker than them, or those who stand out! I always wondered how the marauders got such a 'positive' light from JKR? Remus is sweet, and like Snape needs to belong somewhere - but his choice of people to belong with is lacking... but I guess he didn't have much choice as a lonely lad. *sigh*
I giggled at his comment that his house leader (Slughorn??) would probably give him points for sneaking a Gryffindor girl back to his room! LOL! And the double takes of the others was hillarious! I've been on the end of the double takes when out with Andy! Nobody believed that such a handsome lad would want the bookwormish swot!
I love the playful antics between the two in his bed, he's trying to be the perfect gentleman and she's not letting him! I wonder if his gentlemanly actions (rare for a 17-year-old-who's-permenantly-horny) are due to witnessing the horrendous behaviour of his Father?
Let me think, I normally manage to sneak a request for something in... we've had Lucius tying corsets, and giving her parents a dragon... what strange wizarding thing is young Snape going to do? Hermione's a virgin, and a lot of fics have him collect the blood for potions... but it might be a smidge cliche and obvious... so some strange ritual thingy or something? A long time ago, the parents would watch a wedding night to make sure the deed happened, and then hang the blood-stained sheets out of the window (and I think the Romanian?? gypsies do something similar still, but its a stained white nightie tied to a chicken)... So, maybe a special sheet with runes and spells on it to safeguard a young couple or something?? Maybe it could be shrunk down, halved and put into a precious-metal locket or something as a powerful protective ward to protect them both?? Voldie will be on the up-and-up, they'll need the protection.
Oh heck! what if Hermione's involvement changes time? What if a potion is needed for the horcruxes? And if Snape didn't get a dark mark... Lilly and James wouldn't have died; Harry might have had siblings; Neville's parents would be OK and aurors... it would re-write EVERYTHING.
11/10!
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April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent
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April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absoultely great story, can't wait to read the rest of it! TY for writing, authors like u make me go "squee" cause of the frequent updates and capativating storyline. :)