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by soldiersgirl0709

person LilCas
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Like this story A lot I Hope You Keep Writing It!!
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! It's just how I would imagine a young Severus. It took my breath away when they kissed the first time. And How he put his foot down and said Herione would go with him to see his mom! I miss writing FF sooo much. I'm just glad I can still read it!

I will be watching for an update here! I can't wait to see how this turns out.

Shiloh
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I love young Severus, and the fact he's finally getting what he deserves with Hermione. Poor guy. Bloody horrible Marauders! grr! It's a sweet story so far, can't wait for the next chappy. Thanks for sharing.

Wolfsoul
person Darla
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again I am breaking my own rules and reading a fiction that isn't finished. I love the way you write. I am very intrigued to see what is going to happen in the future(past). Plus the reactions of Harry and Ron when she goes back to her own time. Keep up the great work.
person neelix
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, the way Hermione is falling in love and the way Severus is beginning to soften and accept her, its so wonderful. I am so excited about when she goes back to him.. I bet Dumbledore wont let Severus forget her!
person twinsie
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter and I'm so glad that you have this story completed already. It means that I can look forward to continuous updates. I read from the previous chapter what your pet peeves were in regards to fanfiction...and believe it or not, they're mine too. Well...not so much the holding chapters for ransom since I've never posted any stories, but more about the waiting months and months and not finishing the fic. That and the abandoned stories - HATE them.

Anyway, another great story. I'm glad that Severus is finally happy - now, if he can only get a 'happy'! LOL!
person Jesse
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the lastest chapter!!! Great job!!
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again, I have to say it's nice to see such a well written 'time' fic. This is the best that I've read so far.

I can't wait to see the next chapter, and a glimpse of Hermione thrown into Severus's home life. Not many people take that route so it will be very interesting.

On the creepy Wormtail note: the actor that played him in the movie (Timothy Spall) even squicked me in Sweeney Todd...
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i want more!!! Lol. I love that you update so quickly, not a lot of authors are like that.
Hermione is being sooo bold but that's a good thing because that means limes have to be on the way.
This is beginning another one of my faves by you. :)