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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter, it's so nice to see the guy making them wait. Too many times you see it as the women's fault, and you don't make Hermione out to be a slut for wanting him. Can't wait to read more.
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The talk with his mother was awkward fabulous. Of course that is the last thing that a boy wants to talk about with his mum, hehe. I also love her nickname for him. Definitely suits.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Madietta
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, the "Hermione-goes-back-in-time-and-falls-in-love-with-Sevvy-to-save-him" shtick has been done a thousand times in fanfic. Actually, perhaps a million times. But I still love reading your version, just because it's you writing it. There's something about the way you write that just makes me feel sooo good reading it. Maybe because you are sooo good at it? LOLOLOL Anyway, awesome as always. I like this "daring" version of Hermione very much. You don't always get to see it in the SS/HG dynamics. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Madietta
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, please, please post another chapter today!!!
I don't think I can stand the waiting!!!!
I adore all of your stories!
person Utopia
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I remember the 'Mum, I don't want to talk about that with you' coming from Andy when we'd just started getting physical. She picked us up from work and he was really jumpy and quite upset; and I wanted to crawl into a hole and die! lol! We'd been together just at the end of my monthlies - and he was convinced it was his fault I was on! lmao! I had to give a whistle-stop-tour of female anatomy and monthlies! lol!

Oh lol! Has Sev had to cope with PMS yet?! lol! *run Sev, run!*

I like Sev's mum, such a shame though. I know its the 70s, but she needs a psychiatrist desperately, and a divorce lawyer.

Goodies for meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee later! yay!
person Gertie
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you! You've been greatly missed. I love your version of young Sev. He's perfect, and I'll admit that I'm more than a little smitten. I can't wait to see what happens. As always your stories are perfection.
person Muffy
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. I'm glad you mentioned the 19. I was quite puzzled by that, it is a stretch to think that Severus will be 20 in a couple of weeks (per your story's time line) and still in school, but I empathise with your reasoning. I am curious and look forward to reading more. Thanks for the speedy update!
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was expecting Severus' mom to be a little more loony, but thank god she wasn't. Can't wait to see how Lucius comes into the fic. Great update. :)
person PhantomRose
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!!! I usualy do not read time travel fics because the authors change the whole plot of the original story.. For example Severus never becomes a Death Eater, Lily & James do not die. Which to me makes it not that interesting, due to the fact that Dumbledore says to not get realy involved in the past. Where Severus is concerned he may soften and fall in love, but that may not protect him from Voldemort when Hermione is gone. I do not know where you are going with this fic, but I would like to see where this is headed. ^^
I think I know what is gonna happen during the Holidays, a surprise visit from someone?...

love it & keep going!!!
person kittycat30
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this! The softer side of Snape is perfect!