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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person amd2175
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait for your next update! This story has made me interested once again in reading fan fiction!! Great job!
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey SG,

So Mione met Mummy Snape lol, i like Eileen although she is vastly unaware of her sons blatent sexual allure lol.

I am seriously looking forward to your next fic, and WootWoot young Luci? Are you trying to kill me? :P

Great chapter! look forward to more

xx
person Anonymous
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter :)
person twinsie
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! The unresolved sexual tension between these two are killing me! Get on with it woman! LOL...just kidding. Did I mention that I love the speedy updates?

I like how you've written the teenage Severus - complete with the hormones and the angst...and I can picture a young Alan Rickman in the role too. Him and his silky voice - it's just to swoon for. *sigh* Speaking of swoonage, I just bought 'Sweeney Todd', I think I'll be watching that later on tonight and just "listen".

Looking forward to another chapter.
person PhantomRose
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol. I love the talk between Sev & his Mum! Love it XD..I can just emagine the look on his face when she talked about contraceptives..you made me laugh, thanks!
Keep up the great work!
person mariteri
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the story is going so well. Not that I didn't think it would. You're a great writter. I just wish you could e-mail me the rest of the story! Could you? Pretty please? LOL! Keep up the excellent work and update soon!
person neelix
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great, really good writing and the tension building ebwteen Severus and hermione is lovely, very real.


Keep brining the updates... I log on the check them!!

Neelix xx
person Flowerchild
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far, can't wait to read more of it!
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the ending to this chapter. That conversation was uncomfortable, realistic and hilarious.
When are they going to get it on??? No rush, of course...I'm about as ready for as Hermione is. lol.
Can't wait for the next update. :)