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by soldiersgirl0709

person snapeaddiction
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story!!!
person sam
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o wow is amazing! i can't believe that i missed it!
they are such a cute couple and i love how he is so protective of her and she can't stay away from him
lmao and i love the nickname you gave him, Inky lol nice!
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Simply Awesome. Love this story. ^___^
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter!

LMAO! Our connversations do tend to drift to Alan, Jason or Tom 99% of the time and thier sometimes not so subtle alluring tendancies.

Anywho you wonderful goddess you! Hope for another chapter soon!

xx
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! Elieen is written so well, I was sad to read in one of your responses the basis you used for her being as she is; abuse is never an easy thing to overcome and to many women fall victim and never recover, I love the way Hermione sees her and was supportive of her by speaking of Severus to help bring her back from that edge. The mother-to-son talk was quite ingenius, Severus' reaction had me laughing while Elieen's uncomfortable-ness had me cringing in sympathy (being a single mother of a male child I'm not looking forward to the "talk")...lol Thank you for the updates every day, can't wait for tomorrow! :)

~Jenn
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to hear I get to meet a younger Lucius (not that I mind age at all hehehe) I will be looking forward to it. Another great chapter BTW!!
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! i love this story! i wonder when hermoine will be going back and how it will be then. will he get her pregnant? oh the suspense! update soon!
person carha
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. No surprise there from you. Please update soon, I wanna see what happens.
person AngelBaby
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fab (as usual) few chapters. I've told you many times before and repeat it here again but I love a sweet Snape. His snarkyness is needed for his sweetness to be appreciated. Hermione will win his mother over easily. Am a little worried about the future pranks of James and crew but I know Hermione will bring them down, hee hee can't wait.
Love to see an interaction with Lucius. He's always so hot you could melt into a puddle but a 20 years younger Jason sorry Lucius could give me heart failure. *yummy*
Glad that all is well with you and yours, don't forget to email me with the title of your original works when they are published so I can read and continue to gush over your writing.
person Utopia
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, 18 is considered adult in the UK too, though 21 opens more doors to you than 18.

There is an up-and-coming vaccine for cervical cancer; as cervical cancer is caused by a virus. But the vaccine only works if the woman hasn't had sex... they were on about giving the jab to 11 year olds to catch everyone, then realised giving it at 6 months old was probably better. My doctor admitted that she'd given out contraception and emergency contraception to girls as young as 13. I think it's rather sad that people ignore the legal age of consent.

Snape's mum screams of old-world! She's prim and proper with her 'airs and graces still intact - even if her mind isn't. How the heck did she end up with Tobias Snape? Or did it start off rosey and went downhill after the honeymoon period? *sigh*

James and Sirius are going to find themselves in trouble at this rate - and not just with Hermione and Snape. Lilly is a Gryffindor through-and-through, and she'll hold her threat to James and chuck him if he doesn't behave. It shows how much she doesn't know about Prongs if she didn't ask him to swear a wizarding oath to leave Snape alone, she trusts him far too much. *shakes head*

Ooooooh, and some goodies in here for me too? *giggles*

10/10