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Yay! More chapters please!!

What a fucking jack ass! Excuse my language, but it cant really be helped. Severus' dad is exactly how I pictured him. You did a good job of making him come to life, but at the same time it really pissed me off. If you still have room in the story, I would love to be a passer-by character that punches him in the face and tells him to make ME some fucking dinner. Of course, then throwing a nasty look and his rightful title as "bitch" on the end.


*deep breath*

Sorry, I really get into stories that are well done and yours is a perfect example. This story is probably my favorite time travel fic, and thats saying alot. I usually cant stand them, but yours is very captivating. I love Severus being in love but still being true to his character and how he would have been as a less confident teenager.
My only problem with your story is that I have to wait ( even the short amount of time) to find out what happens next!! Ugh! But here goes the wait, yet again!

Your devoted reader,
E.Q.

Ok, it is so awesome that you updated 2 chapters in one day!!!! So, I'll review each chapter separately.
That familiar really freaked me out, at first I was thinking it was a family member's painting or something like that...way to throw me off. lol.
I am beginning to love Eileen more and more, she's really cool and seems to be more happy with Sev/Herm there. You write her very well.

Awww, very sweet yet intense chapter.
I thought from the title, "Evil Comes to Dinner" that perhaps it was good ole Lucius making his first appearance in the story. Never thought it could be Severus' father.
Please let Severus get even with Tobias! That man truly is swine. All it took was his appearance to cause Eileen to retreat back into herself.
Also, I see a foreshadowing of a confrontation between Herm, Sev and Tobias, possibly? Hopefully not but it'd make great drama. ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter, these quick updates are amazing.

Very Nice. I was wondering when he would show up. Wonder if he's gonna try anything else with Hermione tonight......Hope Severus beats the shit out of him....Can't wait to read the next chapter.

I love Snape's mom!!!

I hope Hermione kicks that pig's arse.
Great update!

What a treat!!!
I almost died of happiness when I got on and saw that you had posted another chapter!
I hate that awful Tobias Snape!!
There have been so many men like him, and worse, in my life.
All of them got away with treating me and my mother the way they did.
I hope he gets his just desserts in your story!
(But not at poor Severus' expense.)

Tobias Snape...You bastard.

I really dont like him SG.

I however did LOVE this chapter, Lol.

xx

OOH! He is trying so hard to do the right thing! And he is aware of the fact, that she will be gone soon.I was wondering, whether he was in denial about that. That is really the part, which is always getting to me with time turner fics. I tried to avoid them for a long time, because most of them have this Hermione-fits-in-better-in-the-past-than-in-her-own-time-and-is-the-most-popular-girl-of-the-school (uh, that was long!) but then, people, especially in school settings, are pretty much the same, no matter the time period and the bookish students tend not to be the most lucky in regards of popularity.

Have you read "Lost" and "Crimson and Gold" ? I read one of them by mere accident and since then I do try reading time turner.