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I can't even revise for an exam without missing masses of plot! lol.

I LOVE that Snape's Mum call him 'Inky' - its so sweet, but no doubt highly embarrassing. I'm 20, and my Dad still calls me 'Squeak' (as a baby I squeaked, rather than snored) and 'Babe' (and I've stopped reminding him I'm not an infant - or a pig, but I get Babe non-the-less).

Does Hermione have a pet name for him? Andy got his by accident, and it stuck. I call him "Bib". (Don't ask). I'd quite like to see a pet name in here... though my requests might have been used up already.

Mynah birds and the 'higher' parrots can mimic, but Lucifer seems to have the intellegence to have conversations in context. At the petshop where I used to work, we had an African Grey who used to sing 'Polly put the kettle on' at about 3 o'clock ish, and bite anyone who went near him who didn't bring him a cup of afternoon tea! (milk, one sugar).

Sev. Sleeps. Starkers. ('nuff said).

12/10 for amusement with the birdie. A birdie who isn't a bird brain.

And unlucky thirteen was certainly unlucky for the lovebirds.

*shudders*, I think Peter might be taking lessons from this cretin (I nearly wrote cro

I'm glad I took time out to read this. I normally don't do the time turner stories since the authors tend to screw them up. This is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter. I like how he knows off the bat that she's from another time and that he'll be her teacher. I really like how she doesn't instantly become friends with the maruaders and lily. I never understood that one. They never seemed like the type of people she'd be friendly with. Oh, well.

grrr more waiting! lol. love the story. cant wait for another chapeter =]

I think we can all remember back to the "innocent" days where we played and explored; when we fumbled and got it wrong... and it is so REFRESHING to see that with these two! Sev isn't running for the title of Slytherin Sex God, he hasn't got the stamina of a marathon runner, he made a mess of the sheets, he didn't know how to pleasure Hermione, and adapted as he went along...

Just about every teen has been there, done that, bought the tee-shirt. And It is wonderful to see that reality come into it.

I'm actually seeing James's point of view more and more... they're going out - who cares? (But OBVIOUSLY I do care, as I'm reading and reviewing)

Sirius is up to something, and Peter is AWOL? Where's Remus?

Love it!!! Please don't make us wait too long for lemoney goodness!! Will Adult snape accept her into his life when she returns?? Don't let Dumbledore erase his memory otherwise what will be the point in her returning at all!! But wait. If the new (and improved) Severus doesn't fall in with the deatheaters, then Voldemort may not rise to power, and lily and james wouldn't have died and maybe harry and hermione wouldn't have been friends and the whole hp world will unravel...
My head is spinning. I went into overthinking mode. Sorry

Ha! The Maurauders can't sneak into the dorms nest to theres, but a snake can?! lol!

Good grief! How did Narcissa cope with the head snake (Lucius?) - I think she was a Ravenclaw, not Slytherin. Though, I think this Lucius has a bit of schizophrenia; one face for his wife, another for the revels. I hope there's a magical equivalent of the condom - god knows what STDs Lu could have taken home!

Lilly has seen the light, though feck knows how she puts up with James!?

severus is just the cutest!!
this story is soooooooooo great :) love it

I love this story !! You're very talented indeed !!!! Are you really going to allow Severus's memories of him and his love from him ??? But other then that keep going !!!