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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo I'm intrigued, I can't wait to see how the angst is resolved. I'm loving this story especially because Severus the loner is so rarely written about. Great job 10/10
person Cat
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm pretty sure this is my first review at AFF and I've been reading here for ages. I love all your fics, even the ships I normally don't care for. This is no exception. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Also just to let you know 'Confrontations and Explorations'(Chapter 18, I think) is missing at Granger Enchanted if you haven't been informed already.
Cheers, Cat
person neelix
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. They are geting good at it, aren't they?? Thanks for posting two chapters... am off to have a cold shower.
person Anon
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg that was so good. i love how you have written snape. snarky with a little bit of nice. i also love the fact that you update every day.

Foofie
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice job. Wonder what Lucius is planning....probably something bad...lol. Can't wait for more.
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG i just love this story. i hape when she gets back to her own time snape remembers
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that is...soooooo HOT. You got me panting here *g
Thanks for this lovely update today. 2 chappies with love, romance and SMUT :)
Please dont let Lucius spoil their relationship. Oh my i am so nervous as if it was my own relationship i ws fearing for.
Soon they will have to part *ohmypleasedont* and i cant wait until they are together again.
Did he think about the contraceptive spells?
I mean just imagine..he gets her pregnant and then finds himself 20 years older when he is about to become a father. *g*

Love your Story
Jocy
person Jesse
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC!!! So hot!! I'm going to need a shower! Great job! Can't wait! How many chapters are you thinking of doing? I hope it is a lot!! I'm looking forward to Hermione going back and the reaction that older Snape is going to have.
person JayneTrazom
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, love this story, but never had the courage to comment till now.

PLEASE continue writing this after herm goes back to the future! this is such an amazing story!! i never want it to end! when herm goes back sev should be reluctant, like he should reject her or something. that would make this wonderful awesome beautiful story last longer PLUS the sex they would have when they finally did get back together would be amayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyzing!!!!!!!!! =D =D =D
person JayneTrazom
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH, and dont get her pregnant, that would just ruin EVERYTHING, cuz then it would be forced, just like momma snape said. NO PREGGERS, dont get her egg-o preg-o.
=D
jayne