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by soldiersgirl0709

person pianita
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brava, brava!
Your story is so endearing, the flow and development is very well calculated. I wonder what will happen next! i cannot bare the fact that they will be separated. Please continue writing!!
person marcia
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your kids sleep from 7-7 you lucky bitch! My 4yr old goes down at 730 (if we're lucky and he doesn't do the "Daddy/Mommy, Nate need...") and is up to see my husband off to PT at 530. Though he did learn that bringing mommy a packet of those disney gummy snack things before I'm awake will get me to open them with out remembering. I only discovered that I did when I started to find bits of wrapper in my bed. Anywho, I'm looking forward to the next ch and what happens when she goes back. Last time you wrote her original time Sev didn't have his memories right? I'm also wondering about our dear malfoy.
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was amazing. I can't wait for the next update. But how are they going to manage her going back - oh God, the agony.
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I agree with you..they are both young and of course not going to have the best experience ever, that makes it more realistic too. It still was very sweet and romantic. Great job!

person BeetleBabes
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i must say, im looking forward to her return to present day and a older severus (giggles insanely) thanks for the many updates!
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Delicious chapter, again. :D Loved it!
person amd2175
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love your writings! When you update it brings a smile to my face lol. I'm actually smiling like no other over here...this chapter gets a *squee* because its so friggin good!
person Raine
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell.

I have been waiting for those two chapters my whole life it seems.
They were absolutely brilliant and I never want this story to end.

-Raine
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.