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for Remember

by soldiersgirl0709

person Jesse
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor Hermione!! Poor Severus!! Hopefully mean Snape_Goddess makes things right again! :)
person carha
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh Severus is far too stubborn for his own good. Well he has 3 weeks to make it better. Lets hope he smartens up some
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it, write more i need more
person Gertie
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved your explanation for the way Severus' memories were altered. My heart is breaking for them both right now. I loved the bit about Draco and Hermoine's "understanding" as sparring partners.
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dont normally review until after the last chapter...but that was such a tear jerker chapter. Loved it.

Red

person ella2
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just spent some wonderful moments with this story, away from the stress of having to finish my thesis. I hope to read more of "Remember" soon. Best wishes!
person SlytherinPixie
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor girl, you just want to take her up and give her a cuddle, then turn around and shake some sense into Severus. Wonderful chapters thank you!
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn you! You had me in tears that time....I kept wanting to leap into the story and shake some sense into Severus. Maybe once she graduates in three weeks he will stop being such a dunderhead? Anyway, sorry it took me so long to review, but I have been following this one from the very start. The scene where they made love and exchanged locks of hair was simply beautiful. You really have a way with words
person snapeaddiction
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omgomgomgomg...... this is horrible. Make it stop. My heart can't take it.

Loving every minute!!!
person amd2175
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was on the verge of tears for these! I just had to leave my love for an undetermined amount of time last month... I miss him so much. Everyday it's hard to wake up knowing he's not beside me, and every night I battle with memories as I try to go to sleep. Walking through the day is the worst by far, you have to act like you're happy when little things remind you of him...a smell, the sunset, rain, music...hell I can no longer drink chardonnay anymore because it reminds me of him. No fun.