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by soldiersgirl0709

person Utopia
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that her coming back is what turns him dark (I think I've seen this before, but have lost the the fic *sulk*). Albus has done more harm than good, to both people in this!

Hermione is heading on for manic depression while Severus is even more miserable because something so wonderful is going to be feet away from him and a million miles out of reach!

*cries*
person Jesse
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love chapter 25!! Great job on it!! lol abut Severus' reaction when Albus mentioned something about Hermione being pregnant.
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is soooo sweet. Is this the last chapter? I hope not. I'd love to read more.
person Utopia
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco has a brain, and a heart. He will only pick on people his own size in this new age of freedom; and had the sense to to walk away and tell someone he trusts (and another Slytherin, at that) that there is obviously something wrong.

The tea and toast incident had me crying. My Granddad was diabetic; he was ill and went into Hypo and collapesed because he hadn't eaten enough during the day. We called an ambulance who gave him an arm full of glucagon and sat with him (and us) while he had a cup of sickenly sweet tea and toast. He was in such a state of shock (having always been so careful to have never gone into such a state before) and was sick. We called another ambulance the morning after, he went into hospital and didn't come home. It was a two months after my 18th birthday, where he'd danced with me and all my friends. That little scene with Hermione had me remembering all those months of watching someone I loved die after a massive stroke (following the hypos) left him brain dead, but not dead biologically.

Anyway *wipes eyes* back to this plot. I'm surprised Harry and Ron haven't dragged her to Poppy, or is Draco the first to really get a good look at her in this mess?
person Gertie
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As horrible as it is to read about how damaged Hermoine became, it was such a feeling of relief when Severus told her he loved her. But now I'm all twitchy waiting to see what happens next. As for future Remus fics- I adore and worship you.
person Texas Peach
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. I check everyday to see if a new chapter is up. I am eager to see how their life progresses after Hogwarts. Please keep going!
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm completely new here and I've never reviewed anything like this before. I just had to tell you that I LOVE this story! Thanks for writing it. I can't wait to finish it.
person Utopia
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To die of a broken heart is actually a medical condition. My other Granddad went the same way as Hermione is. He didn't eat much, and what he did eat didn't stay down long; he slept and washed and the cycle began again. He died exactly a month after my Gran because he refused to live... though, they had the oddest recipe for a successful marriage: an argument over something silly every day! It worked for them! lol!

Hermione needs help, and perhaps for a certain dark wizard to sneak into her hospital bed. What if this got leaked to the press?? I can see Rita Skeeter latching onto the story - and then Lucius finding out (or even finding out through Draco??)

person Utopia
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS!

Love conquers all! wooooooo! I'm going to have to dig out my inner Disney Princess and go all mushy and romantic.

*sigh*
person Pyroangel
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok I cried here, it was just...lol idk. I like happiness after sadness.