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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so beautiful. He finally owned up and they're back together! I love the way you wrote everything in this chapter. It really brought them together without being predictable and sappy. Good job and I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, so good! That was the chapter I have been waiting for, best one yet!
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person zucca
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love all of your stories. You are a wonderful writer as well. However SS/HG are still my favorite couple, but have you ever thought of writing a Draco Ginny story? I am sure that you would do a fabulous job. Keep up the great job.
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sighs and puts head down* may I have more? lol
person Utopia
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness me! I go on a long (dirty) weekend... and I am 9 chapters behind! So, while my baby tidies up (I'm going to get him a sign that says 'househusband in training') I' gonna catch up.

I love Sirius's little quip about wanting to know how Snape got into the girls rooms when they couldn't (God help the Gryff girls if Black's on the prowl! lol). Remus is showing his maturity and an alarming ability to cope with pain. And Peter is AWOL, again!

I loved the tickle fest! lol! I don't think anyone would dare to tickle the bat of the dungeons, but Hermione's an exception. Tickling is probably more torture than a crucio! lol.

I wonder what Dumbledore is up to in both time periods, and whatever 'butterfly effects' Hermione has induced look like.

12/10 (you got an extra point for tickles!)

mwah.
person Utopia
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking along the lines of Romeo and Juliet here... A pair of star cross'd lovers. Well, the 'stars' are crossing into the atmosphere. Hair swapping, sex and meteor showers have to mean something to the modified time turner thingy??

I loved the touch of Sev plaiting his hair into a braid for her wrist, his hair must be quite long to do that and not get all frizzy and break!

The first-time sex was PERFECTION. No other words for it.

ooooh... off the scale luv. 20/10!
person Utopia
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Table *snort, giggle*

Lucius is a voyeur *dribbles*... And what a sight he got that morning!! I wonder if he's jealous, or if he's going to go back to Voldie (or is it still Tom?) and report in?
person Mara
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing series, I love it so much. Every morning I jump out of bed ready to read the new updates. It's become my morning routine!
person Utopia
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dumbledore, you BAS***D! Screw time, he could have let them be happy and stopped so many people dying! Yeah, it would have messed with a lot of memories, but they are people's lives! (like last night's Dr. Who.)

And Snape still loves her, and he can't have her without being arrested for having sexual relations with a student! What a mess!

Though... does Lucius remember what he saw?