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for Green Is The Colour Of.....

by Jilliane

person Evange
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you got this chapter out. This story reminds me of the stages of grief, loss, sorrow, denial, anger, and all else that goes with a catastrophe. I am not really sure if these are the stages, but I think that is what I would feel. Severus should not be alone, he needs to finally tell Harry how he feels. It's obvious isn't it? Thanks for updating.
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alone: Aww, can't help feeling sorry for Severus - he's feeling so left behind and unwanted. Poor man! I hope there is a bit of happiness for him soon! Hint hint.
person Mikra
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this :)
person sp
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute story-----but very short chapters. This makes your story harder to load and read.
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Sev!! I want to hug him!
person Bones
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Wipes away tears* that's so sad! love this story.
person Evange
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this story the more I read. The chapters are short, almost difficult to review but I like that you are making Snape more human. He really needs Harry or anybody in his life to make a difference and he is finally realizing it. I have always thought that too much was being made of Harry. He always seems to big for his britches for me. But he has his mothers kindness and caring. Write more soon.
person Evange
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep going
person sp
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story------but----- please write longer chapters. It is hard to become involved in the story line if the chapter is to short.
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a sad fic. I KNOW Harry cares for Severus in more than a sort of fatherly way, I can feel it! I wish he would tell him. :( Please update soon! I love this fic....though it does have a tendency to depress me....o.o But its so good! Thanks for updating!