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for Green Is The Colour Of.....

by Jilliane

person Jacqui
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg! The angst!! I love it!!!!
person cravedom
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am not leaving!

Um, patiently waiting
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Resolution - Ooooooh! I am eager to read the next one now! Does Severus work up the courage, or does he manage to talk himself out of it? Also enjoyed the way the smut was written "Disloyal hand"! Fabulous! UPDATE! SP
person Evange
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why does Severus think Harry came back in the first place? Of course, it is because Harry feels the same way Severus does. They are both afraid to say what they feel for fe?ar of being rejected. Especially Severus. He has been so long denied any thing resembeling a normal life, he is afraid he will be laughed at by Harry. He thinks he is not entitled. Only Harry would be entitled to what he wants, but never Severus.
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hate when you end your chapters. Because they always make me want to get into your head and see what comes next.
person kneeya
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Always with the cliff-hangers! Please up-date soon! Thank you.
person Bones
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are evil. However that was the perfect time to stop. love this story! please more soon!
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update!
I'm so loving this! You write the characters so perfectly. ^_^
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, I just love how you've created the suspense of double meanings within Harry's dialogue(does he/doesn't he?) and Severus' emotional turmoil.

Excellent!
person cravedom
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had delayed reading this story because the summary makes it sound like a little drabble, boy was I wrong. The summary does not do this story justice. Your story is bittersweet and heart wrenching. Severus does not ponder, he reveals to us his barren life and the price he pays for the love of green eyes.

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