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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Perhaps you should have," he muttered, and went inside.
That line really resonated with me. Again, with the despair. Severus just drips with it. And of course Harry would find him. The boy could find a Horcrux in a mountain of centuries' old dragon poo, for goodness' sake. Really, there's nothing he can't do...except see what's really happening in front of him. Oh, those two. So stubborn.
That line really resonated with me. Again, with the despair. Severus just drips with it. And of course Harry would find him. The boy could find a Horcrux in a mountain of centuries' old dragon poo, for goodness' sake. Really, there's nothing he can't do...except see what's really happening in front of him. Oh, those two. So stubborn.
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a very hot resolution. Who needs words, right? Ha! I'm glad Harry finally saw the truth...at least a bit of it. But how to get through this little dilemma? Hm. I guess I should read on and find out, huh? This is me. Reading on. Going.
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cathartic chapter. Well, mostly cathartic towards the end. I'm dying here, lemme get to the finish....
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wha--?
You did not just end there! ... Okay, you did. That...was...a twist, certainly. Very ... twisty. I'm such a backstory person and I'm dying to read more! But good story. Very emotionally charged and you got the character reactions well and I really liked it.
I'm gonna find something green to cuddle with now....
You did not just end there! ... Okay, you did. That...was...a twist, certainly. Very ... twisty. I'm such a backstory person and I'm dying to read more! But good story. Very emotionally charged and you got the character reactions well and I really liked it.
I'm gonna find something green to cuddle with now....
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully sweet, all the while tugging at your heartstrings.
Loved the writing style and the way you have the characters' personality. Especially how Harry's character seems to be quite the handful.
Hoping to read from you again.
P.S. No need to reply to this. (I only use the pc so e-mail checks are tend to be...every once in a long while?)
Loved the writing style and the way you have the characters' personality. Especially how Harry's character seems to be quite the handful.
Hoping to read from you again.
P.S. No need to reply to this. (I only use the pc so e-mail checks are tend to be...every once in a long while?)
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazingly good. It makes me feel what Snape is feeling. It's beautiful.
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And Harry gets a clue! A little one, but a clue nonetheless. I knew there was hope for him. Your writing is excellent. The emotions that pour out of the story are tangible.
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I finished rather than reviewing every page, partly because I couldn't stop reading long enough to do so. Your story was amazing. I loved every chapter, every word. Snape appeared more as a real person than in most any other story I've read. His feelings ran deeper and were far more intense than I've ever encountered. They were also more real than most any other story. Excellent writing! Thank you for sharing your story with us.
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I found this fic to be lovely and really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing :)
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! You know me, I love the angst. Snape being noble, and stubborn and determined to be independent, giving his love the chance to be happy with 'someone else'. And yes, I admit it, I like happy endings - probably becasue RL so often isn't, I prefer a satisfactory resolution to the angst. Keep up the good work on the other stories - I definitely look forward to reading more of your work.