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i really like it no lie, its different i dont think i've read a fic in this perspective. I like how it gives a different view of hermione the whole "everyone thinks im writing notes" lol hilarious. Update soon please!! FANTASTIC JOB

This is wonderful. I love the journal writing bit. This is a great start and I hope to read more.

Could you give me a heads up when you post a new chapter?

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i like this one too!

I think it's hilarious that you wrote a story during class that starts with Hermione writing in her journal during class. A bit of modeling after yourself were you? ;). Love a Hermione on chocolate withdrawls. I think it explains her seeming a bit spazzy. I often think that the Hermione that lives in her head is not as "put together" and logical as the Hermione that she presents to the world. Ron is a bit paranoid isn't he? I like the idea of Pansy and Hermione becoming friends - that girl needs some girl friends (both of them actually). Looks like a great start and I'm about to read the next chapter. As far as writing goes, the all caps in a little distracting, but I see that you've asked for a beta and they would probably help with that. So, I'm off to read the next chapter. Oh yeah, one more thing: I love that this is a Draco/Hermione story but you haven't introduced Draco yet. Nice touch!

Nice introduction to Malfoy. And good conversation between Malfoy and Harry. I wonder what the former would think about Pans and Harry? Hmmmm... So what happens with these new students? Who are they? Why are they there? Are they orphans? (I don't know where that came from). Maybe one of them is related to Malfoy, and Malfoy knows it and doesn't want anyone to know. Develope Hermione and Pansy's friendship and have Draco find out and react. When does Ron notice Harry's hickey? Okay, girl, get your thinking cap on and then get your writing glove on and get to work! :)

im eager to see how this story maps out...