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for A Fated Marriage

by onetinykiss

schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wooo-hooo! And we're off! lol So they're finally officially paired off....oh man, Ron is SO not going to be happy about this. I mean, if he freaked out about the Yule Ball and letter writing, he's probably not going to respond so good to them getting married huh? I can't wait for more, I was so excited that you updated so quickly. Hope you update again soon!!
person KellyJCR
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so pleased to see an update so soon. I am really enjoying your story and I am anticipating the meetings. I am patiently waiting for your next installmant great job.
person Kristen
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Please please please update soon!
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I've been checking religiously for a new chapter and I was so happy to see one today! I can't wait for more, and I hope you update again soon. I know it's a Viktor/Hermione fic so I know they're supposed to end up together in one way or another, but I'm still on edge, I need the confirmation! lol

Just a couple small things. You wrote "defiantly" rather than "definitely" (I've guilty of meaning to write one word but writing another, so no worries) and also you called the frenchman Italian when you were describing how Hermione wanted to get away from him. Just a couple little things that catch us all once in a while.
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It's an interesting idea your plot movement is good.
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up with the next chapter please
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay! You updated! I've missed this story. Great update, I can't wait for more. Especially since we're about to find out the matches....Hope you update again soon!!
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good stuff! can't wait for more.
person Kristen
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please! update soon!
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I can't wait for more! Hope you update again soon!