rate_review Reviews

I liked your story and am eagerly awaiting your next chapter....i especially found that last chapter amusing

I love a good Viktor/Hermione story and this is living up to that potential! Keep up the good work. I hope that the manager is just testing her, because at this point I'd cheer her on if she scratched his eyes out. Can't wait for the next chapter. -JT

First off I'm so sorry that you got a nasty review. Sometimes trolls turn up on AFF.net. This happened to another Dramione writer friend of mine here on AFF.net and she reported the person as it was out of line and uncalled for. I encourage you to do the same.

This story is very sweet, fun and entertaining. I think you're doing a wonderful job of developing the story, keeping your characters interesting while also developing them emotionally and psychologically plus you're giving us your insight on a character that JRK only scraped the surface of: Viktor. Keep it up and give us updates when you can in between your very busy life schedule. I'll keep coming back to check every so often.

That said, I want to KICK DORIAN'S ASS! WTF? I hope Hermione gives him the old one-two and Viktor better get his ass in gear as well. That's his woman! How dare he allow anyone to speak to her that way - she's not some girlfriend or arm candy - that's Hermione Granger for goodness sakes! I don't care how much he trusts Dorian, he had better man up! Would serve him right if Hermione didn't speak to him at all.

Looking forward to the next chappie.

Um. Hi. I was just wondering if you would be offended if I totally bitch slapped Dorian? Please? I think it could help. lol Great update, I can't wait for more! And about that email...forget about it. There will ALWAYS be someone with too much time on their hands just looking to cause trouble. I'm glad you chose to persevere rather than abandon your story. I would have been quite sad if you had. Anyway, yeah. Just my two cents. =D

Please Please update soon!!

I just discovered this story and just love it. I like how you didn't make Viktor to be bumbling idiot because he's not. I like how you didn't make them fall all over each other and that there was a sense of uncomfortableness (is that a word?) because that's real.

"She was so fragile looking that he was starting to wonder if she would even make though the honeymoon in one piece." This was the funniest line! I love that you've given Viktor a slight edge that includes a touch of arrogane, smugness, alpha-maleness, possessiveness mixed with compassion. VERY SEXY!

nice chap i love the sexual tension that is developing..... can not wait to read the next

really good chapter, I love the older brother protectiveness. can't wait for more. OH it would be nice if she was still able to go back to hogwarts. I will wait and see.

I am so glad to see you have just posted another update. This chapter was nice and obviously opens up a plot angle with Ron, which I am excellent to read about. I realize it is important to begin developing the relationship between Viktor and the Weasley

nice chap.. i wonder what is wrong with ron i bet he is in love with hermione and is having trouble accepting her future marriage to viktor.... ok so i guess i am going to have to reread the beginning chaps to see if i can guess what you are hinting at... great job with this chap