rate_review Reviews

I really really like this story
I think you should take it to granger enchanted and post it there too!!

grangerenchanted.com/enchant/index.php

aw I loved it!!!

I am happy to see another chapter up. Really like the story!

Bad story, simply because it is a 'marriage law' story. In the REAL WORLD, no one would condone that law and people like myself would fight against it, with deadly physical force if necessary.

this story is fantastic! i really enjoyed hermione speaking out against the wives, it would be unlike her simply to just sit back and take it like Dorian told her to. Look what she did to malfoy in third year! This is the first Hermione/Viktor fic i've read, i tend to avoid them because he isnt one of my favourite characters but after this I think I'm going to try and look into them more. Its an inspiringly well written story and I appreciate the real life element of writing a story. Everyone has their own lives to get on with. However, that doesnt mean that I'm going to be sitting impatiently on my hands until an update is posted.

I cannot wait to see how this story plays out. It truly is something wonderful to read, even if some of the people deserve a good slap around the face and told to grow up.

Also, well done with the inclusion of the love of Harry, not something i would have thought up really. He always seemed to gravitate toward Ginny too much. Its refreshing to not see them all over each other.

Final note; I honestly laughed out loud at the threat from the Weasley males in 'the talk'. Charlie especially. It tickled me no end and I truly believe you have a talent in writing. Don't ever stop and I wait in haste for an update!

Until then!

pixie

I am totally completely and utterly in love with this story. Please continue. I love the Hermione/Viktor pairing, and yours is one of my favorites.

Thanks!!!!

Cute story. Original take

I've been following this story since the beginning and even though you don't update nearly often enough it is one of my favorites. I'm ready to hear about the wedding and honeymoon! Let's see some tension too--maybe the law is repealed and they have to decide if they love each other or not. Please update soon!!

Cake definitely cake. Yum...I want cake now.

I like this story
I just can't stop reading it ;)