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hey!! where's chapter 9?! this is really amazing, hope it continues! and that last 'naughty bit'.. wow.. :)

Definitely one of the best fanfic stories I've read in a long time. Remus and Tonks have always been one of my favorite HP couples, and your writing style is completely mesmerizing. Please continue writing!!! I can't wait to see what happens next...

I absolutely love this, I honestly can't wait to see where you take this! Update soon please!

This is one of the few multiple chapter stories that I've read in its entirety, probably because its well written and sensual. Well done. Usually Remus/Tonks pairings are cliche and dull but I love a good one when I find it.

this is wonderful! i'd love to read more, so keep it coming! <3

Terribly sorry I haven't reviewed - let alone read - this chapter yet. So bad of me. Also I feel wrong for constantly requesting sex in this lovely story of your's which almost feels innocent at times (the way you describe how Tonks feels). Almost. But dammit, I think this chapter proves just why I wanted it so much. Let me be the first to say: GUH

Seriously. Good show. Hell, fantastic show. The way you described...everything. Brilliant. Warm and almost fluffy but damn sexy and passionate at the same time. Also? Everything about Remus (and I do mean *everything*)? habajacfffffffguh. Don't. Stop. Writing.

I also do know that when one doesn't have a beta one tends to make weird and unusual spelling mistakes to the point of you yourself thinking you might actually be retarded. So here's a helpful little tool that won't fix the weird jumble of words we all get now and again (I once wrote something along the lines of 'and she he went' and posted it like that. Very strange indeed), but it will help with spelling errors:
http://www.spellcheck.net/

Oh. I forgot. The mention of 'A Clockwork Orange' was awesome. I've always wanted to read that, even though I haven't quite read up on it yet. And... "Mindfuck". God help me the image of Sirius saying that (to Remus while talking about sex, helped, too) got me nearly as turned on as the entire sex bit. I think there's something wrong with me...

:/ Whether or not there *is* something wrong with me (and there probably is), I loved that part. Funny but so oddly cannon at the same time. It's not cannon, of course, but I can easily see that happening. Great.

Some spelling errors and I'm not quite sure what Molly was saying about Remus and (this is gonna sound weird) the meat issue, but aside from that...

I quite liked it. There was something warm about how you told Molly was in her kitchen. I can't put a finger on it but it was comforting. Tonks...Tonks makes sense to me. I go on about how I really like your Remus and Sirius, but this Tonks does make sense to be. Which is odd, because I'm only like her cuz I'm a bit paranoid sometimes.

Good show. Can't wait for the flashback ;)

ahhaahaha I love your Sirius! Really, I do. Sometimes I almost love him more than your Remus...*almost*. But I certainly liked this chapter. The ease of it all... And the awkwardness of Tonks in it was just so perfectly realisitc. Everyone has felt that awkward at some point. I do it quite too often....which added even more to the effect! Fantastic writing!

This story is so great! I hope you continue it. I love the dialog between Remus and Sirius. Great job!