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for When it Rains it Pours

by hotboz2007

schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay when I started reading this story.. I wasnt sure if I was going to like it since it seemed more like a poem than a story. But I kept reading it because I do that to myself.. and I ended up loving it. Draco's part was a little iffy for me because it just seemed like the same exact thing was being written, you didn't explain too much of what he was thinking or feeling. But I kept reading it because I was caught up in it all the same. And then I came to the very end. Can I just say that I really wish I had tissues nearby. That was the most heartbreaking thing I've read on here. And for that, I give you two thumbs up.
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very emotionally compelling story. Is this the end though?
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. You might want to go back and do some editing but I really enjoyed it. It's so achingly sweet and sad. Thanks!
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is just to depressing. But I would like to know the full story of why she cheated though.
person amyfeddy
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes please do, I think thats a great idea
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes...loved it btw.
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES! YES! YES!!!!!!!!!
And maybe you could even further the story a bit?
I, for one, am chomping at the teeth to find out what happens next!!
person luvhp
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's done???? He left her? Oh how utterly sad. He has to forgive her, well I guess he doesn't *sniff* my hubby did (I was YOUNG & STUPID)
Yes, please write it from Draco's POV!
person kmplease
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES, the story was great, but I want to hear Draco side! Please update soon!!
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah is there more? i like it!