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by slashpervert

person zer0
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so fkin great!!! i loved it!! will it have a second part? it is nice just the way it is, but it could have a whole story to follow!!

just keep writing!
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! I knew it was Harry! A black wolf with green eyes! Man! that was excellent!
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo good one. First I thought. Mmm Remus and then Ooo Sev but in the end it was Ahh Harry. Lovely even though it was aminal sexy time.
person M.
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Very hot.
person Jilliane
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM

I thought it must be Harry, a green-eyed wolf, but then...........

.................and it turned out to be Harry after all!


Clever, putting it in this category. Threw me for a minute, and saved the surprise ending.

Well done!
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was steamy! At the mention of green eyes I thought of Harry but then I pshawed because why wouldn't you put the story in Harry/Draco then, so no, that couldn't be right. But as it turns out you're just a sneaky, sneaky author, however, it made the ending much more satisfactory. Very well written, an absolutely fantastic, well-contained story. I'm bookmarking it so I can drool over it later. Thanks for sharing!
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so freaking HOT Slash!!! I'm not into creature fics at all but this was just really intriguing and seductive to read much like the werewolf.....and you're sneaky putting it in the M/M category. I knew it was Harry when you described the eyes...awesome one shot. Maybe make it multi chaptered?
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was hot. I really like that it was Harry in the end, but we all knew it would be! lol. Great work!
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good!!!

But you should have post it in the Harry/Draco section ...