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for Ice Shadows

by Graylor

schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So breaks my heart everytime!
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is absolutely horrible. Not the story, the story is lovely. But how Draco acts, how he treats the father of his child. That is horrible. I would hope for a happy ending. But man, this one has a point to it, and I do love it...it just hurts. Good job.
person sophi
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Disturbingly beautiful. Well done.
And I would strongly suggest that people watch Draco around himself and his son.
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't say I like it but I also can't say I don't. I feel like something's missing and I don't like how some of it is worded. I can say for sure that I don't like how it ended, if this is a oneshot. I'll be back with more of my thoughts when I'm not pressed for time.

Nikki
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
person Sitnam
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice prose, but I get the disturbing feeling that Scorpius isn't going to survive, and how f***ing selfish can Draco possibly be? I don't like to see him as that shallow, so I'm going to pretend I never read this story...