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by fbowden

schedule September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lol well done.
person Jenn
schedule November 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story was rather unexpectedly humourous all the time. I loved it :)
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
brillient. You have snapes snark down perfectly.
person Darkless
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. I don't usually like first-person point-of-view stories, this one gripped me from the beginning. Those snarky inner-workings of our favorite Potions Master were oftimes hilarious. I love it when an author delves into the mind with detail and coherency. Nicely done.

Oh, and teh smexx was sluttily awsome! You got mad skills.
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
could you please send me the link for the other chapters.. thanks!
person Kip
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really liked this, and the dialogue seemed charmingly in-character. Thoroughly entertaining. 'Purr
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are the only writer i know that has the most perfectly written snape. Perfect!!! The way he thinks, talks, acts, insults. PERFECT!!! Never give up your quest on perfecting him. I daresay that you are better at wording snape than J.K herself ^_^
person fbowden
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to take a moment to thank everyone for their lovely reviews of this story, I really do appreciate all your kind comments, they inspire me no end to write more!

Flic x
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say this is exceptional. I have read every story you have written in this archive. I knew from the first one that I would be doing so. I love this one the best. You capture the characterisations of Snape, Harry, and Draco so well! I love the tenaciousness of the boys to be with Snape. I love Snape's inner battles, and his eventual capitulation. I love knowing what he is thinking versus how he reacts outwardly.

Your dialogue is absolutely spot on. The nuances of Snape's speech, the petulant tone of both Draco and Harry ... all very realistic.

You are a very talented writer. Thank you for sharing.
person Diane
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't even begin to tell you how awesome this is. I think this is the first time I've read a story from Severus's point of view. You really made it sound like his voice as well. It's sarcastic and intelligent. The story itself was exciting, emotional, and oh so hot. I really enjoyed seeing the way a relationship built between Harry and Draco before they... turned on Sev. Ah bad pun. I about cried when I thought Draco was dead. I'm so glad Harry's a little bit of an idiot. I love how you balanced the love in the relationship so it was still sarcastic and Severus didn't turn into a sap. He loses so much of his appeal when he loses his edge.