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for AFTERWARDS

by neelix

schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She was still stirring! LMAO! I loved this update.
person Angie30
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh YES i liked :)

I was as impatient as Hermione lol

Perfect first time for this perfectly sweet story.

THANKS

Jocy
person Angie30
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, they always said love is a road filled with a lot of twists, turns and plenty of potholes til you reach the smooth pavement. I look forward to another update. I'm really hooked.
person Angie30
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story, I'm loving this one just as much as your other ones. Its about time those two "Hooked Up" Well done!
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Freaking Crap neelix! That was so hot and so well written! I need to go have a cold shower. That was some mighty fine writing.
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story's really sweet.
person Tenar10r
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just found this and I'm liking it alot.
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah thx for the clarification neelix, might be because english is not my mothertongue :)

Anyway i love the atmosphere you create between the two of them. That is really getting me addicted to the story, the slow loving way they deal with each other.

Keep it up, i cant wait to read more :)

Jocy
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really do love your story, but why is Hermione 16 when she is teaching there? Maybe a typo?

Love Jocy