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by kuritaichou

schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very possibly the shortest story ever. Hmmmmmmmmm....
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Go Harry!
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It looks like a draft of a draft to me... I think you wanted to write something simple but, maybe unintentionally, you ended up with something simplistic.
my best regards
ravenheiress
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow short but got to the point!