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for What's Coming to You

by limesoda

schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved where you were heading with this....why finish it there! You have to write the next scene!
person sandra
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you should continue with a chapter of them shagging him at the same time.
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHA! This made me laugh like nobody's business! Excellent....start? Perhaps more?
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not what I expected but hey! Will prolly make him even more of a tart!
person Annie
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg. omgomgomg. OMG. tell me there's more!

O.M.G.!!!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahhahahha!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH! That was really good and really really funny!!! Please please please tell me you are going to continue this and write the next scene? YOU CANT LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great work, hoping to see more!
~gorgeousbowneyes