rate_review Reviews

*insane giggles* I love it!
This is an awesome story.

Wow, I really liked this. You kept everything quite accurate to the books, whilst putting a relationship between Cedric and Harry into it, and I felt it worked quite well. My only point of criticism is that Cedric lived, and I know at the top you said you were thinking of re-writing a fifth year as well, and now it makes sense as to why you would do that, but I'm not entirely sure what I was expecting with this. I was seriously waiting for the grave yard scene and some serious angst to come about from Cedric dying, but that didn't happen, and it left the ending kind of empty. Although I do like that Cedric is still alive, and it would be very exciting to see a fifth year as well, possibly in a little more detail because Cedric isn't actually in the 5th book so it would involve a lot more of the 'expanding on cannon' stuff, it wouldn't be all that easy to write by just twisting scenes, you'd have to completely scrap some and remake heaps new ones because of the fact that Cedric is actually dead in the 5th book but not in yours.

Sorry I got onto a bit of a rant there, probably thinking about the mechanics of it too much. I would really like to see a continuation of this, it was really good, and it would be great to see a relationship between Harry and Cedric progress beyond Harry's 4th year, you don't see that very much.

Well good luck with it, hope to see something soon!
~gorgeousbowneyes