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for Love and Forgiveness

by HarryGinny4eva

schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot! The shit hits the fan yaaaaaaaaaay! It's about time Ron and Arthur got their commeuppance, Deep down they're really nice blokes and only trailed Draco out of concern for Hermione but really their heads were up their arses weren't they? Oh the loveable hoons!

Great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next you really are an awesome author!

MMMMWWWWWWAAAAAH!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now im really curious... what did they find???
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Man!!! I'm sorry to hear about your story! That's some major suckage!! The good news is, that the new bits of your story are FANTASTIC!!!

I really like Narcissa. She has always fascinated me...almost as much as Lucius. There was practically nothing about her in the books other than her risking life and limb to protect her son. We knew nothing of her personality, but I think that you have both her and her husband pinned down perfectly. I'll go as far as to say that JK herself would be impressed!

I look forward to more yummieness! So, from one Wicked fan to another, you keep on defying gravity!!
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mrs. Malfoy does have a very nice ring to it. Sounds like our lovely Draco and Mi are getting even closer and quite serious. I really like how Harry and Ginny and thier children are getting along with Draco, really sweet and Teddy sounds exceptionally cute! However I can't help but wonder/worry about Ron. Looking forward to reading more :) Hugs and Happy Easter!!!
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i went to the old link and almost had a heart attack when it didn't work!! haha
great chapter! i heart the wake up call ;0
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD HG4EVA how on earth did your story get deleted? *hugs*


schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yahooooo! Another great chapter! I'm glad Harry has seen the light and hopefully Ron and Mr Weasley will soon too...how about an update on Blaise and Beth? It's about time they re-entered the fray!

Well done great job as usual!

Desserts to you too!....LOL
person luvhp
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Me too, me too!!

Okay, here I am reading away and laughing, cringing, gasping, only to find you have a whole new chapter up for us! You are great!
Here you are having to RE-post your whole story and yet you still have time to update a new (LOVELY) chapter!!!
So, Lucius really needs to get his pureblooded head out of his ass thinking Draco would actually sign that crap! True, true, he gave his excuses as to why and apologized (GASP!) but the luncheon, Bloody Hell! Also, nice to know your draco didn't sleep with anyone at school :) Well, since he went to University after that, he must not be VERY much more experienced than Hermione ;)
And Ginny's little Fruedian slip at the table, Wonderful! *big cheesy grin* Although I was laughing my ass off when she kept admitting Draco was sexy in school and talked about his supposed sexual conquests.
As for having sex in your friend's house, why is it that the girls always feel like it's a bad thing and the guy's seem to think "what?" LOL
I love that Harry is coming to actually like Draco Malfoy, he's hard not to love in this story! He's so cute with Teddy and Albie.

Okay, it's Friday already, my bosses have been out of town all week and I haven't written one word (on paper) for my stories. I seem to be able to bring the story along just fine when I can't get to sleep and need soemthing to think about, but then when I get here I just don't have to gumption to do it! :(
I have another story that keeps creeping into my mind and I really want to get started on it, but I have learned my lesson with the first one. Write it out, get a beta and make SURE you have an ending in mind :) *shakes head* I'm at a total loss in my thought process for C,C,C and it's driving me nuts. I just wish I could write at home, but lord knows "Vernon" would question why the hell I am writing a story about 'freaks' and such!

Well, obviously I have no problem writing in here, so I'd better go for now befoe I turn into a review crazy person!
Loved it, loving it and can't wait to see the next update. I sooooo hear wedding bells in the future.
Oh, and I can pat myself on the back for thinking Draco and Pansy were already 'betrothed' when the comments were made at B/B wedding :)
Okay, really going now!!
Have a good weekend, Easter and see ya next week!
person kazfeist
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Charming chapter. Hope this one doesn't disappear. Happy Bunny Day! I love Hermione Malfoy, and I can't wait for Ron and Arthur to get their just desserts. :D
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so VERY glad you're back! It totally sucks that your reviews are gone, but no worries, we'll simply review some more :) Looking forward to Friday!!!