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for Love and Forgiveness

by HarryGinny4eva

schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
me like a lot!!!! keeps getting better!!!
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

BAD AUTHOR! BAD BAD AUTHOR! UPDATE NOW!!!!


*pouts and gets on her knees* Pwetty pwease...
person luvhp
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Gods!!!
Okay, where do I start?
I've seen this story updated several times and kept putting it off as lately I've been trying my hardest to only read finished stories (hard as that is since I think I've read everything Dramione in here)
So, instead of looking for my muse,(sorry gang) I came in today to see what wonderful stories had been updated, and seeing you had 8 chapters up, I decided to go ahead and start on this one today as the summary really had me intrigued!
Being married at 18 I didn't get to go clubbing, but damn, your girls are seriously a bunch of fun. And the sexual tension between Mione & Draco, *fans self* (that's what I love about Dramione)
The inner monologue was cracking me up. And when they "followed" the girls back to Hermione's place, too funny! Blaise giving the girls the "Zabini Charm"
So, I steeled myself for the Blaise Hermione date and almost cringed when he kissed her, LOL, only to find she felt nothing, yeah! I mean, hello, this is a DM/HG fic, so I should have known better, but still.
Okay, the best part had to be Draco's message he left her and trying to find out how to erase it, too damn funny!!!
And finally, after the jog, lunch and chat, they FINALLY get a moment alone and Draco did not waste any time at all!!!! Okay, it took 7 chapters to get there but WooHoo!!! Only to have Ginny rain on her happy little parade.
I was completely surprised by Harry's attitude, thank you so much for making him much more understanding than most fics(mine not incl, lol)
And oh how absolutely sweet of him to hold her and tell her he would leave for her, not him!
Okay, the #1 thing about your fic that I love, you have most of it written, BONUS POINTS!
I will tell you now, I am NOT a patient person. I soooo want to read stories from beginning to end in one swoop.
My husband teases me because I finshed DH in less than a week (while at work mind you) and I have been devouring books at home. I'm reading The Vampire Huntress Series by L.A. Banks (Very good read; sex, action, humour) and she has 9 of 12 written and I am dying for the next book already.
Oay, enough babbling.
I LOVE YOUR STORY!
Draco & Mione 4EVER!
[edited because this story has me all lightheaded and goofy that I had way too many spelling errors]
person kazfeist
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter. Glad to see Harry, Molly and Ginny on board. I foresee some fireworks on Draco's part when he finds out about Harry's behind-the-scenes manipulations of his college career, but, hey! It could be worse. I always find it odd that Ron blows up over Hermione's choices, after he's already married, or with someone else. Just so hypocritically ludicrous! :D
person shelagh
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco may wish for firewisky instead of wine LOL. Great job on this fic please update soon.
person kazfeist
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was nice! And Beth's got someone now, too. Someone who will help her forget whatever horrible time she had, when Hermione had to help her out, yeah? :D
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better. So funny! Nervous Draco= so cute! Where can I get one? Amazing.
person mhaj78
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH I LOOOOVE THIS STORY!!! I seriously smiled the whole way through chapter 7. I'm so glad you updated!! I love their awkward vulnerability...it's so, so adorable. I can't wait to see their relationship develop...it makes me happy. :)
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, this is getting even sweeter the more you write! I just love their chemistry...
Draco's b-day party in the next chapter, then? Can't wait! :-)
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really nice chapter!!! please update soon!!