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for Love and Forgiveness

by HarryGinny4eva

person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree, I wish there was somewhere to respond to reviews to as well. I just make do with adding something in the review column or say something on the next chapter if there is one. I'm pleased you liked that little one shot. I still can't get the darn song out of my head and I really enjoyed trying to write for that challenge.

As for your story, I LOVE it, this is so much fun and yet with every upheaval I am hanging on with baited breath wondering what's going to happen next. Man I was so wrong about Ron, I want to shake him even though I understand where he is coming from. And I am so excited that Beth and Blaise are making progress. I've just read where they went out for Chinese and he had that big argument with her for not staying true to herself and that he liked her just the way she was. What an awwwwwwwwww moment. :) And now I must continue (and ignore all domestic duties) so I can find out how Draco and Hermione get along at the Potter's. :)

Oh and I must add, please tell me you're writing something else because I would love to continue reading your stories. :)
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG Chapter 16 was so hot and they still haven't taken that final step. Whew!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Me again!! LOL Wow, Blaise and Beth got married!! I sure didn't see that coming, certainly not that fast. And reality did jump up and give them a nasty slap in the face, didn't it? But I'm going with that they work things out just fine. Still not sure where Ron is on all of this but I hope he comes around. I was surprised about Arthur siding with Ron too. I guess most fics have Molly going off her tree and him being the calm one. Nice to read something different then. But the son (or daughter) should not be punished for the mistakes their parents may have made) :) Oh and Narcissa's birthday party. OMG. I feel so for Hermione but Draco and Ginny are absolutely right, he did a lot to keep peace for her, it's only fair she tries to do the same. Although yeah, being back in that room would not be good but who knows (besides you, of course) LOL something good might come out of it too.
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gosh darn you!! You made me cry in chap 22 when Hermione and Narcissa had their little heart to heart. I was in tears. Now I have to find tissues and chocolate. I hope you're happy now!! (joking)
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now I've only read the first three chapters so expect more reviews from me but I just had to stop and tell you - WOW!! I mean it sucks that your story got deleted but thank Merlin you put it back up for me to find. :) I LOVE your sense of humour. I love your portrayal of Blaise (I'd slip him AND Draco my number) LMAO. I haven't read many stories that take place in the US so I'll probably get confused with the flat/apartment bits but I'm sure I'll figure it out. Snoop seems totally awesome as a friend and I love how she and Ron just looked at each other and 'just knew'. Plus it makes the way clear for Draco without Ron coming across as a jerk. :) The bachelorette party sounds like a scream and I love how you have a mixture of muggles and magical folk hanging out together. I like how you described the mugglefolk as those 'with the sight'. Made perfect sense to me. :) And now I must read on and see what becomes of Draco now that Ginny pretty much chased him out of Hermione's apartment er flat. :)
person risotto
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww..such a sweet story. Fantastic.
Really showed what complications Draco and Hermione would face if they loved each other. Ron, Lucius, everyone...
Vert realistic.
Thank you for writing such a great story.
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A broken pc and school have kept me from your fic! Evilness I know! I just wanted to say that your ending was lovely and I am so very glad to have seen this story through. It was a beautiful fic and I loved it! I hope to read more from you soon. Lots of Love, Miah.
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of THE best Dramione stories I have ever read - and I've read quite a few! It really was bloody fantastic. The way you write is brilliant and I loved how you built the characters. excellent fic!

I totally look forward to whatever you write next cos I'm sure it will be cool.
person luvhp
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HG4eva,
I am so sorry it took so long to finally read/review the end of this wonderful, truly magnificent story!
I will have to admit that I think, subconsciously, I didn't want to read it, because then that would mean it was over *sniffle*
So, I had started to read it Monday, but being Monday it was crazy around the office, not to mention I had to leave early that day as child & teen #2 had a Dr. appt to make sure her 'cloud chasing' self didn't break her ankle on Friday am. Luckily, just a bad sprain.
So Tuesday, I found myself NOT reading this fic, reading everything and anything else. By Wednesday I had new thoughts running aound my head for a new story (won't post until it's more than half way complete*note to self, FINISH C,C,C already!) And that leaves today!
So, I finally read it and I LOVED IT! Of course, why wouldn't I ss you said, 'they lived happily ever after' and oh my...5 Kids!!! 3's enough for me thank you. lol

Your kitchen scenes make me want to buy drapes/curtains for my dining room *snicker* as I can plainly see too many neighbors were I to 'enjoy' such activities, lol.
I especially liked how you rounded out everyone's future for us and didn't leave us hanging. You have wonderful talents in writing believable HP fiction and I highly encourage you to continue as I will definately be here to read anything/everything you write!!!
And thank you, thank you!! ;)

**Hogwarts: a History, LOL! I'm sure Ron is soooo pleased**

Note: Hmm, in making the seating chart I was having a hard time trying to find a date for Blaise, I'm sure Beth will do nicely...if you don't mind.
person hpfann03
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU MY DEAR (I WANT TO SAY FRIEND HERE AS I FEEL LIKE I KNOW YOU THROUGH YOUR WRITING AND CHARACTERS) AUTHOR ARE A GOD SENT TO THE FANFIC WORLD OF HARRY POTTER AND THE DRACO/HERMIONE CATAGORY I JUST LOVED THIS STORY AND HOPE THAT YOU DO WRITE MORE. AND DO YOU HAVE ANY OTHER/OLD STORIES I CAN READ IN THE MEAN TIME? SO I GUESS ALL THATS LEFT FOR ME TO SAY IS ONE LAST THANK YOU AN IF I CAN BE OF ANY HELP OR INSPERATION TO YOU EVER MY EMAIL IS MISSYLEIGH_03@HOTMAIL.COM
XOXO