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for Love and Forgiveness

by HarryGinny4eva

schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The Teddy secret spilling, the love confessions adorable, adorable, adorable! Truly sigh worthy! And ugh! Ron is acting so Ron-ish! Somebody smack him! And Arthur, I though he was the sensible Weasley! Great update once again! :)
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please forgive my ignorance for bypassing this story numerous times, it is incredible! I love the way you fleshed out the characters, and to be honest, I got teary eyed at the graduation speech, and I knew you had me then! Love, Love, Love Blaise, every girl needs at least one bonifed sex god in her life to show her a good time! Any chance of B&B action? I love that they are friends with muggles and muggles and wizards get together in clubs for both, gotta wonder if Wizarding England is as enlightend as USA? Swoooooooon on the B-day cake kitchen scene with D/Hr, *sigh*. I have read up to 17/18 on my phone, and now I am cross-eyed and half blind, but it was well worth it! I'll be checking for more, Thanks for such a great story!
person luvhp
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh you little tease, ending their segment with I love you's! :) Yeah!!!
Oh, Ron is so aggravatng! Trying to get Seamus and her together, what an idiot! At least Seamus was nice about it. : )
I had so much to say, but people kept interrupting my reading (damn people, don't they know I have fics to catch up on Mondays!?)
Oh, Teddy was too cute!
Oh, the way to my heart was seeing my future husband with children, and I'm sure Hermione would have felt the same if she were in the living room with Draco and the boys.
The party was great and I love how everyone (sans Arthur & Ron) were accepting of Draco & Hermione. Lovely chapter, really!
now, on to the parents house!

schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! i can't get enough of this story!
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness me, what to comment on first! Ok, Draco and the little kids....Awwwwwwww. I have not been able to wipe the smile from my face and I think the thought of him with mussed up hair made me drool in my keyboard a little! Secondly, Hermione and Draco sitting in a tree, someting about spelling, love and a pram. You could see they were in love from a mile away but for them to say it was just too cute. And finally Molly W. and his ass from his elbow! I may have peed myself a little from laughing! Sorry if thats too much info! You keep up the great work and I will go start on my pelvic floor exercises so we don't have the same problem next time.
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two things: 1.) When I you said this chapter was to be a bit short I was inclined to be slightly dissapointed, but let me just tell you, you more than made up for length with content! Like, seriously. And 2.) I LOVE LOVE LOVE that Draco calls Hermione "Mi" as it's what I've always thought Draco would call her. Once again, great update!
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhh weeeeeeeeeee! I love this chapter and I'm glad there was a bit of angst! Ron is a total arse and I hope he gets his comeuppance....even though I love Ron he can be a bit of a bum.

Now how about the loads and loads of romantic shaggong? Please tell me it's in the next chapter! I'm getting sick of the heavy petting I'm not the only one who wants to see Draco and Hermione hop on the good foot and do the bad thing!

I'm glad this chapter was nice and long not all of the good fics out there have long enough chappies!

Anyway great stuff keep up the good work!

And please update soon!
person luvhp
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, OMG, OMG!
I'm completely and utterly speechless, I'm still replaying the chapter over and over, and over in my head :). . .

Wow!
Okay, so the next thing is the party and then Hermione's parents. Oh Gods, don't make him take her at her parents, LOL!
LOVING this story to pieces! Keep it up and

HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!!!!!!!!!

(BTW, I saw several new stories up today, but HAD to read yours first :) I just love your Draco)
person janl
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter! Hot! For a minute I didn't think the frosting would actually get on the cake. Way to go.
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh now i want ckae. damn you! great chap too!