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for Love and Forgiveness

by HarryGinny4eva

schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeee! Another sensational chappie!

I love how it was only Lucius's good breeding and manners that stopped him from chewing Hermione and to some degree Blythe out and I love Narcissa's child like enthusiasm at all things muggle! I'd love to see her let loose in somewhere like FAO Schwartz or Bloomingdales! She'd go na na...rofl! I can't wait to see how the cooking lessons go and how Ron and Harry work into the future chapters! Is Ron a total arse for the whole story? I hope not I really do like Ron even though he's a tad of a shit head. And what of Blaise and Beth? I want to know how they go and how long before he knocks her up! And for that matter IS Hermione up the duff or is she just sick from stress? Can stress make anyone ill like that? Methinks not!

Anyway great work and I cant wait til the next chapter I'm counting down the minutes til Sunday....LOL

Remember the offer of a death by chocolate mudcake is still there for a really meaty chapter!....ROFLMBFAO!

Okay I'm going away now!
person Jullsy
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well H, I am really jalous now about your bath tubs in USA. I absolutly must try them when I come for the HP theme park ;).
Lemon means "Explicit sex stories in general, especially in anime fan fiction, are known as lemon, a term which comes from a Japanese slang term meaning "sexy" that itself derives from an early pornographic cartoon series called Cream Lemon."
"The term lime denotes a story that has sexual themes but is not necessarily explicit."
At least what's written in Wikipedia.
I am impatient for the next chapter. kisses
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'There, you freak. See? It
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story, my dear! And Lucius is so true to form!

I particularly enjoyed the little private moment between Lucius and Narcissa. I personally like Lucius/Narcissa pairings, but everyone is just so freakin eager to kill her off...

I saw 'Wicked' on Broadway, and it was fantastic. The Wizard of Oz is what first sparked my interest in witches. And I'm sure I'm not the only muggle who refers to the Wicked Witch of the West for the image of a witch. I never liked Glinda....she was too sugary, even in the movie...

Anyway! Keep up the good work, and I'll keep reading!!
person kazfeist
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like the reception will have some fireworks after all! :D
person Jullsy
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi H! What a nice chapter and a hot lemon. But I have a technical question - is this lemon possible in real life? Because this plot is not possible in our tub - too small. Are tubs bigger in US? kisses
person luvhp
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I almost left early to go pick up a book from the bookstore (Dern library only has two copies and I am too impatient to wait for 4 more people to read it first, LOL)
So, I saw you had updated...YET again! Damn you make me look like such a slacker. I already have my next chapter 80% done, but honestly, I'm not quite happy with it.

But, I digress, back to YOUR story!

Wow, busy household this week. The speeches were lovely (I had to make one and I sucked, should have asked you for help :) had I only known )
So, you have me thinking: Draco's duties????? What could that possibly mean?? Obviously Narcissa wants Hermione in the family, but for aminute there I was nervous that there was already an arranged marriage or something. But, I know you would NEVER do that?!?! Right?!?!

Oh, and I SO want that big bathtub. *waggles eyebrows*
Crumb, time to go~!
Later
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this story is progressing and how the relationship between Draco and Hermione is evolving. I can't help but feel trouble brewing in the horizon, however I have full faith that you'll see us through it. Also, can someone slap Ron, I have this serious need to do so, he's still being so stubborn! Men! Great update as usual! BTW B&B's wedding read lovely! :) -MD
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you.ROCK.
this chapter was so well written, and you capture every emotion so vividly, it's fantastic to read!
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww no cookie dough scene not even for lil ole me?....**Pouts**....LOL

Seriously though great chappie...I had a good old giggle when my mind's eye puctured Narcissa bustin' a move on the dance floor and getting her groove on...hahahaha! I hope you make the next installment just as meaty...and I can't wait to see what Lucius says to Draco...dum de dum dum daaaaaaaah!....LOL

Great work and puh-leeeeeeeeeze hurry with the next chappie! (I'll bake you a death by chocolate mudcake if you do!....LOL)