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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your Narcissa in this chapter and her bonding with Hermione was great. I like that they were able to discuss some serious issues and get some of the heavy stuff out in the open hopefully it will inspire another Malfoy to open up as well ;) I also really like how much Narcissa seems to care about Hermione, it's sweet. And thirty-nine chapters!?! That's not too far away, it's been a lovely story and I look forward to seeing it through :)
PS Happy St. Patrick's Day!
PS Happy St. Patrick's Day!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Incredible, simply incredible! Oh how I wish Hermione would have spoken to the Malfoy's in the great hall! Man! What the hell was JKR thinking? Draco was a child, he could be redeemed, sheesh! I loved Narcissa's description of Lucius, it's so spot on! Lovely chapter, just beautiful! Oh, and before I forget, the Parkinson lunch? Thought they fell out of favor from the party? Is Lucius keeping them around for business, or perhaps to put Pansy in young Draco's eyeline, or to watch the man squirm as only Lucius can do? Hmmmmmmmm?
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love that narcissa's taking a tv to the manor lol
i'm quite intrigued by this lunch date with the parkinsons..
i'm quite intrigued by this lunch date with the parkinsons..
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeeee! That chapter was worth a good fat slice of Death By Chocolate Mudcake with raspberries and sugared whipped cream on top! Who wouldn've thunk it? Lucius and Narcissa HUMAN!....LOL. I can't wait to see what you put in the next chappie and if it's good enough I might just take you out for a night on the town and a three course slap up dinner all the trimmings!...Oh how much of a suckhole am I?...LOL.
Seriously great job with the chappie....when will you be updating? TELL ME...Tee Hee!
Seriously great job with the chappie....when will you be updating? TELL ME...Tee Hee!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, maybe the sex is good
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Gushes proudly* Thanks for the shout out! I agree whole-heartedly about Glenda. And I must say that the bathroom scene with Narcissa talking about the special affects was HILARIOUS!!! It gives a whole new meaning to 'The Wizard and I!'
Oooh....the way that Narcissa describes Lucius just makes me all tingly....because I believe that it is very close to the character that JK Rowling wrote. The shell is what everyone read in the books, but the man that Narcissa knows is the enigma. That is the true mystery of Lucius Malfoy...because Rowling never wrote a private scene with him, so we'll never know how he really was...
Narcissa and cookies! And I hope that you write in the scene where Narcissa tells Lu about the TV and VCR....it'll be better than Oprah!! Update soon, my dear because this story just keeps getting better and better!!!
Oooh....the way that Narcissa describes Lucius just makes me all tingly....because I believe that it is very close to the character that JK Rowling wrote. The shell is what everyone read in the books, but the man that Narcissa knows is the enigma. That is the true mystery of Lucius Malfoy...because Rowling never wrote a private scene with him, so we'll never know how he really was...
Narcissa and cookies! And I hope that you write in the scene where Narcissa tells Lu about the TV and VCR....it'll be better than Oprah!! Update soon, my dear because this story just keeps getting better and better!!!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Lucius' 'conversion' sounded organic and natural. And Blythe is just a charmer! :D
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that was just sweet. Thanks for making Narcissa the rock of the relationship. As I may have said before, that's just how I see her. You've made a lovely beginning for the relationships with both elder Malfoys to grow and blossom. And I bet Blythe will love being a bridesamaid, when the time comes. :D
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole thing up to here & I love it! I can't wait to see where things go from here. I have two question - will Hermione eventually tell Draco about what happened to her at Malfoy Manor & why doesn't Draco remember?
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww loved all the bonding going on in this chapter. And Lucius, Lucius is making an effort, and Draco professing his love for Hermione to his father that was amazing! I like your Blythe because I know a Blythe in my life lol! I love the fact that though this is fiction and obviously fictional characters a lot of them are relatable in subtles ways that make the story all the better! Once again, wonderful update and OMG I'm so excited that there'll be (at least) up to a chapter 39!!! HUGS -Miah :)