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for Love and Forgiveness

by HarryGinny4eva

person Trelweny
schedule August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful story. So much thought and depth involved that sometimes it was overwhelming. But then again... that IS a potential in Draco/Hermione pairings that is more pull than detainment.

I honestly thought it was Narcissa all along who obliviated Draco's darker memories from 7th year. It made more sense than had it been Lucius, particularly in the How of it and the thought all together. I think it would have been a whole lot more difficult to try and give explanations that would be believable had Lucius in fact been the one.

Loved the Malfoy engagement ring. What Really impressed me was the charms each woman who had accepted the ring added to it. Thank goodness no one charmed it for Pureblood! But then again... those in the past who might have been sticklers for such a thing probably never considered the possibility of anyone Not pureblood Getting the ring so why would they think to add such a charm?

Thanks so much for writing.
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story -- charming, funny and well-written. Even though there's some angst and drama in the earlier chapters between Ron and Draco (I haven't got past chapter 18 yet) it's still got a really light-hearted tone. Nice!
person saffron
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you have no idea how much I love this story. this story got me through me not being able to write because of the car crash I was in. Great story.

Just to let you know new chapter for DR/HR story forsake all others

http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600017451&chapter=8

Thank you for all your wonderful comments.
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel like we're playing review tag. LOL Wow, no kidding you just left Sydney? How's that for a small world? I have family down there but I live further north in the Sunshine state. :) I'm glad you enjoyed your time there but yes, it's better to be closer to family and friends, I would have chosen to do the same.

Squeeeeeee that you're almost ready to post a whole new story. You're doing it the right way too, I really should write out a heap and then post, not go by the skin of my teeth. The first one I ever wrote here was pre-written, can't say the same for anything since. LOL I will definitely be bombarding you, of course, just not in a big heap like here because with the new one I will be waiting for updates along with everyone else.

Now while I'm pleased you enjoyed the Office Party story, (and Merlin don't I wish my office was more like that too although they are fun to have a few drinks with) I got far more enjoyment out of knowing I cheered you up when you were having a crappy Monday (Monday's are rather like that, aren't they?) I'll take a virtual huggle (never say no to those. LOL) And I'll forgive you for making me cry this time but.............. LOL Look forward to the new story. :)
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry again. Again with Narcissa and Hermione. What a conversation. For the first time I really understood why Lucius is the way he is in your story and why Narcissa still loves him. Learning about love and forgiveness obviously takes a lot out of you and I can see why she tries so hard to hold on to Hermione and wants her friendship and understanding. As for Lucius and his little pre-nup he had made for Draco - good on Draco for standing up to him, I think Lucius liked that a lot and also, he just realised just how much Draco cares for Hermione and (okay it might just be me) I think he realises that Draco and Hermione have found the love that he found with Narcissa. Oh and I totally agree on the ickyness factor of Narcissa wanting to talk about sex with Lucius in front of Hermione. Ewwww! Although, Jason Issaccs on the other hand - well he sure knows how to make bad look good. LOL
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I was just thinking how much Ron would curl over and die if he knew how much like Lucius he was and then I go and read it in this chapter. I am obviously like Angelina in your story, I'm forever sticking my foot in my mouth. I think the only time I open it is to change feet at times. Looks like Hermione and Draco just survived another little test. :)
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Ron and Arthur got their apologies out and I do think they meant them, I don't expect them to be forgiven straight away either but I'm glad Hermione and Draco were willing to listen, which is always a good start. I'm so pleased that she asked Blythe to be her attendant, that was a lovely touch and yes, I think I can hear the screams from here too. LMAO
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you had me crying again. I could deal with Ron and Hermione's talk but when Draco went to confront his father...........OMG!!!!! You did have me wondering in an early chapter if Lucius really was blocking Draco for the reasons Draco thought he was and it was confirmed the moment I read Lucius telling him that he was not the one who worked the memory charm. And when his mum confessed to it all - well out came the tissues again. And then Draco ran to the Granger's house of all places (didn't see that coming) and I was just a blubbering mess. I hold you totally responsible for the mess my computer desk is at the moment. LOL
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What do I say here? There are many stories on this site that I love and writers whose stories I simply cannot get enough of. But with your story...I laughed, I cried, I held on with bated breath, I got angry, I shook my fist, I all but buried my desk in tissues (and if you knew me, you'd know how much I hate to cry), I was surprised at what I got wrong and sometimes I was so right about something I practically patted myself on the back. (lol) I sighed at the tender moments and shook my head at some of the reactions (I too have in-laws who tried to take over my wedding) and was amazed at how much I 'got' certain parts of your story. In all, this was fantastic and I resented anyone or anything that got in the way of my reading this from start to finish. (Damn real life getting in the way). At least now I can stop bombarding you with my reviews although it wouldn't look so bad had I discovered your story earlier (but then I wouldn't have got to read it all in the one hit). I LOVED this story, I LOVE the way you write and I look forward to anything else you might write in the future (the very near future, I hope). Thank you very much for sharing this story. Now I need to get rid of the tissues, buy more chocolate and pretend I care about the real world again. LOL
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okayyyyyyyyyyyyy, maybe Ron didn't take that as well as I thought he might (you think - LOL) but I'm so glad Ginny came around and that it was Molly who helped bring her to her senses. Didn't see that one coming. :) I like that Harry is Hermione's rock so to speak and that they are at least trying to get along for Hermione's sake. Blaise is a right little shit stirrer, isn't he? I wonder if he will finally get tamed by Beth. Just imagine a pureblood with a muggle. LOL Guess I'll just keep reading and see. :)