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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I always want a Hhr finished story. which means Harry and Hermione hooked up together no matter how it started. So i really wish this story has more chapters. This is good. I want to read more
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well-written, but a tad too short for my taste. :p
Still, a solid 4.
Still, a solid 4.
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow....will there be more? I would love to see Ron's reaction to this and just how the three of them could cope with each others betrayal.
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting title. The dynamic among the Golden Trio is becoming tarnished. Hermione's action in dragging Harry into her fights with Ron was selfish and planned, of course, but her taking advantage of Harry's innocence and shoving her almost-rape of Harry into Ron's face will probably make the three of them split forever. I find her actions mean in the extreme.
The interplay of the three friends one knows from the books makes this story all the more sad. This take on the threesome could happen in any place to anyone, and does. I suppose one could claim it was out of character for Hermione, but that's the entire fun of fanfiction. An interesting, all too human tragedy.
The interplay of the three friends one knows from the books makes this story all the more sad. This take on the threesome could happen in any place to anyone, and does. I suppose one could claim it was out of character for Hermione, but that's the entire fun of fanfiction. An interesting, all too human tragedy.
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boring. What is the meaning? If it's plot what plot, even then it's pretty useless! Waste of space. Waste of time. Waste of ... you get the meaning.
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What is that? Is it even remotely H/HR? If you named the characters Hank, Richard and Hannah you would not even notice it.
That was really lame!
That was really lame!
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, very well done.
For some reason in the back of my mind I was thinking Ron would find them.
For some reason in the back of my mind I was thinking Ron would find them.
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not bad .. are you going to continue?
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a bitch. using him to piss off ron. damn. that was a good story though.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is there more to this story? I think an explanation would be a pretty good idea...