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for Slaughter

by Blaqk

person tootsie
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great plot. i love it, update soon =)
person Meeeo
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM

I agree ;D this reminds me so much of Water! I am really hooked on this *____* mean Draco is like, one of the best things in the world =P

schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I think so far you have kept Draco and Hermione in charater really well. The start reminds me a lot of a story called Water. (btw if you have not read it I sugeggest you do) But really well done so far
person purple dragon
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far!I can't wait to see where it goes.I like the mean Draco.
person PotterEntourage
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honey, that chapter wa soooo Malfoy! It was perfect! Loved the imagery of the copper tinged sweat, just genius! Looking forward to more!
person kitryder
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want Male Dom! u gotta let Draco put hermione in her place (underneathe him ;-),so tell me babe,when ecxactly draco going to devour that know it all witch alive?
person jossie
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
do you know why i like this story so much,because draco is a badass,not a lovey dovey nice guy.
person jossie
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
{"Draco found himself imagining walking up to her as she was babbling on at him about something and slapping her across the face to shut her up. Granger falling in a heap at the floor by his feet from the force of his slap, where she belonged. On the floor; no make that in the dirt, with all the other dirty bloods. His palm marking that ivory skin, bleached from hours in the library, crimson.

granger stumbling to stand up, grabbing onto his arms to help her stand, him pushing her back down to the floor with a sadistic grin. Granger whimpering, realising her place, a fat tear rolling down her face over the crimson spot where he had marked her. Granger defeated, admitting to him that he was superior to her in every way.

Granger
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
are you a malaysian?by the way,this is getting good,u have to continue
person kazfeist
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think the only solution Hermione has is to make sure Draco doesn't want to bring Pansy there. A well-placed hex in his bed would do the trick, I should think. :D