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for Slaughter

by Blaqk

person kazfeist
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good luck on your finals. I assume you've already interviewed and know where you'll be practicing. I appreciate the two chapters, and I'm glad you gave Draco a bit of punishment for his actions. Update when you can. :D
person miakitty
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
call me sick,but i hope he take her in a hard way
person Michelle
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That's all I have to say.
Please update soon!
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Probably one of the best Draco/Hermione stories in terms of real characterizations from canon and the anger/hatred that Draco really has for Hermione that I've read yet. That's quite a compliment because I read a lot of Draco/Hermione. I LOVE how you've managed to write them to the T and STILL create sexual tension. And dammit, your sexual tension and UST is so FREAKING HOT. I really love the way you write Draco...this is definitely going into my favorites...you rock so much : ) ::::handing you a home made strawberry shortcake::::
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 4. Go Hermione for getting a new man! well sorta...this Michael guy sounds HOT and he's a Ravenclaw? perfect! Draco is gonna be so pissed...lol, which sounds like more fun for us : ))) I"m loving that he's obsessed with her but still disgusted by it...of course he would be, he's Draco....can't wait to see what happens next. Off to read Ch. 5!
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 5 :::blowing kisses to you::: that kiss was HOT..thanks for that...I can't imagine where it will go from here, but I know it can only get more intense. I hope Draco doesn't hurt Michael....oh what would Pansy say about this?
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is brilliant! i cant wait for more!
person mariteri
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work! It doesn't by any means read like a first time author. It reflex your advid reading and shows off your writing skills brilliantly. I cannot wait to read more of this work. The plot is good and your ability to pull it off only sets it shining. Keep up the good work and please write the updates ASAP!
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Law School, you go girl, and don't apologize, real life always comes first! Great chapter, I thought the hottie was Zabini at first, how delicious would that be? Looking forward to their date, Love that she's taking notes on dating! HA!
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That had to be the best confrontation scene EVER!

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