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by Blaqk

schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a fantastic story - perfect Draco characterization: bad boy to the core, sadistic, possessive, dominant, jealous and full of internal fire....too bad you won't continue - hopefully you'll pick it up when you can.
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Too bad. I hope you return to it one day.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm still here darling. And fuck! LOL. So sorry to hear about all of your RL issues, hope you're feeling better..and I'm just glad you didn't abandon it. So funny they're both trying to move on but can't...I wonder what they're gonna do about that? mmm? Hope you can update sooner next time..looking forward to it.
person kazfeist
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah. He's finally realizing his emotions. Can't wait for the rest. :D
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg finally a chapter, i am so sorry to hear about all your misfortunes, and I hope u are in better health, cause your spine dislocating from your ribcage does not sound pleasant or right, and I am glad u walked away from that car crash. with the the new chapter things just got more interesting, and I love the angst soo much, so please if u can please update sooner and more often, thats if u can. i love this story so keep up the good work. Please update soon.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry such horrible things happened to you, but i'm glad you're ok! This chapter was not crap, it gave great insight into the minds of your characters, especially twisted!Draco. And the little interaction w/ Michael and Hermione was too cute! Great job, and welcome back!!!
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story, very hot, draco is taking it a bit too far-leave the country...lol. Please update!
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far. I like how you are depicting Draco here. I look forward to more.
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hell that has to be a tease of a first taste of fic. Love the originality and brutalness of this and I am glad there is a potential HOTTT bf for hermione other than that numskull RON. Anyway that has to be the most in character Draco and Hermy confortation ever and one of the most hottest, please, please keep the Anger and Angst, And I have to agree wholeheartedly with some of your other reviewers, I HOPE DRACO FUCKS HER HARD, AND NO SOFT MUSHY SHIT, WE WANT SCREAMING THE PANTING, THE CLAWING, THE FIGHT FOR DOMINANCE DANCE!!!!!! Remember the piece u mentioned bout the the mating habits of the chinese fireball, hell I would pay to see that dance between the characters. And that piece where pansy was jerking him off and he was picturing abusing Granger, that was fucking hot. And I will go back again to that drunken confrontation scene, that was so raw, and please let next confrontation be more raw next time. OH My GODS this has to be one heck of a story in the making, so please keep up the brilliant work and update SOON!!!!!!!
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So glad you're back...I was looking for another story in this section and was pleasantly surprised to see that you updated. Michael sounds kinda hot, but I want him outta the way.lol I like how you're keeping them real in character, makes for a more compelling story....I was a bit confused about the last line but I can't wait to see where you're going with this. I recommended you on LJ on my LJ page but that was over a month or so ago.