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If you would consider it, I would like to assist you with your story writing when possible as your beta. Please email me a response.

plez update soon!! i cant wait for the next chapter! thankz for using my name.

UPDATE!!!! im going crazy wating 4 u 2 update.... C R A Z Y .... if u dont update soon i think i might die. u have them in there own little group (so cul) but maybe u could have one of there dads come bake and teach or something (the new dada teach) and a new evil come up that the 'slitherdor' house must fight.just PLEZ DO SOMETHING!

love it,
-Kay-

How about "A Tale Revised" because they are meeting the same way that dray and harry did but instead of becoming enimys they became the friends that harry and dray could have been... give me a holler is you say yes. love the story...
-Kay-

Slythendor is interesting to say the least. I've been reading fan fiction for a long time and never saw anyone do that.

It was a good start, especially for a first story ever written. I quite like the flow of your story. The mirrowing of both boys learning about the others family was nicely was. I also like that you made Scorpius an artist, I haven't seen that before. Still hope he will sort Slytherin, though...I just can see him in any other color, well maybe blue/silver.
As for a title, I don't know how you plan to continue, but based on the advice from boths fathers You could go for something like "Second Chances" then again that is not very original. Seeing how AS has already noticed S on the platform and S is an artist playing with some words could make for a title, maybe "Drawing you in" would be an option. You see the whole artist thing somehow fascinats me.
Anyway, I hope you will update soon.

A new house?

Interesting...

I don't love it but at least it is something new?