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schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should have put 'chan' in the warnings. I don't like to read chan, and would have appreciated a heads up. I kept thinking, 'any minute now, we're going to find out that they're 2 adult teachers acting out a fantasy'. No such luck, unfortunately.
person yaoified
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
first... this was very well written

second... there should be a 'chan' or 'shouta' warning somewhere...

also... 11 is too young of an age to respond to sexual stimulation with an orgasm. while girls can reach puberty as young as 8, boys tend to reach puberty a bit later in life - not sayng it couldn't happen, but mostly a boy starts puberty around 13 and it ends around 17-18.
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the story .you got me whating more is there a chapter 2 or something.if so e-mail me .i like to read but cant spell at all.but how needs to spell wen i can read.
person SamGORE
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a whole new side to Harry Potter.
:D
It's Harry Potter made sexy!
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There is a difference between minor and pedophilia. that was kinda sick.